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3/26/21, 9:56 AM
Coach Mark was always one of my favorites. thanks for revisiting this
3/26/21, 9:00 AM
Great ideas here, but it would benefit from slowing down the pace of the storytelling. The twist at the end (about Dr. Sato using his nanites to change Coach Johnson) is interesting, but it makes no sense to have the 1st person narrator revealing that this is something he'd never know. If you had to insert this bit of information into the story, it would have been better to have Dr. Sato gloating about changing Coach Johnson into his boyfriend, then commanding Coach Johnson and the narrator to forget he said anything.
3/26/21, 8:30 AM
never apologize for a chapter too long. we are here to lap it up!
3/26/21, 7:55 AM
So hot!
3/26/21, 7:50 AM
mhhhhh,I really envy Pine. I'd love to have powers like these
3/26/21, 7:35 AM
Love How the foot stink and there musk corrupts him! Love this mental Struggel!
3/26/21, 7:16 AM
normally,I'm not really into these remake/sequels but I believe in your talent to make this amazing
3/26/21, 7:02 AM
Okay. could be more erotic.
3/26/21, 6:33 AM
I like what dakeblade wrote turning the coach would be a great & hot idea. making them help Henry turn both teams.
3/26/21, 5:04 AM
This was so hot!!!! loved the little brother pov. Wish i could read your other work!