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3/26/21, 11:13 AM
i really enjoy it would love a sequel to see what he does to them
3/26/21, 11:07 AM
I suspect Marc will be redeemed at the end of this tale. :) Now, who could the holder of the other ring be? My money's on Max. He saw the effect of the ring on Riley and Marc in an earlier chapter, maybe he decided to buy a ring of his own...
May 28, 2006
3/26/21, 11:06 AM
I remember this story from decades ago. back when the pygmalion website was still up. thank you for bringing it back here. this is one of the stories that was in the back of my mind for the longest time. Currently, i am straining in my cage trying not to blow my load. lol
3/26/21, 10:25 AM
can't wait for the season finale😍
3/26/21, 10:18 AM
I love a good predicament! A shame the odds are stacked unfairly against Dale... :) I was pleased to see that this chapter addressed my thoughts about the understated reaction to Marc totally reprogramming other characters. (Which were shared off GSS, in case someone other than the author is reading this.)
3/26/21, 9:56 AM
Coach Mark was always one of my favorites. thanks for revisiting this
3/26/21, 9:00 AM
Great ideas here, but it would benefit from slowing down the pace of the storytelling. The twist at the end (about Dr. Sato using his nanites to change Coach Johnson) is interesting, but it makes no sense to have the 1st person narrator revealing that this is something he'd never know. If you had to insert this bit of information into the story, it would have been better to have Dr. Sato gloating about changing Coach Johnson into his boyfriend, then commanding Coach Johnson and the narrator to forget he said anything.
3/26/21, 8:30 AM
never apologize for a chapter too long. we are here to lap it up!
3/26/21, 7:55 AM
So hot!
3/26/21, 7:50 AM
mhhhhh,I really envy Pine. I'd love to have powers like these