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3/25/21, 8:50 AM
Been a great series
3/25/21, 8:46 AM
The style looks familiar and the nods to this author's previous work are a giveaway :) Very entertaining and excellent characterisation! I was distracted by whether it's Norseman or Nordicman, but that's a minor issue and easily addressed.
3/25/21, 7:32 AM
very good hope you continue this one. i fully expected charley to find out he wasnt wearing the ring afte saying he loves xander. maybe for next time !
3/25/21, 7:02 AM
i concede, this final chapter has me horny and straining in my chastity, which i really felt close to orgasm with just a few taps or shakes of the cage. I left this chapter partially read before bed, and now i have returned three hours later waking up needing to properly read it because it would keep me up, not knowing it's resolution, in a constant state of frustrating arousal. Can't wait for the next continuation of this series!
3/25/21, 6:20 AM
So HOT!
3/25/21, 6:16 AM
Hi, Essex! I'm glad you're enjoying "Carnival Trance"! I wasn't sure whether it would hit a chord, so it's terrific to hear you like it! Part Four is close at hand. The carnival mesmerist is going to open THIS night's show by demonstrating that boys who obey even the simplest commands feel pleasure. Then he'll take the three friends to a scene that fans of robots, drones, and such like might like to read, as well as those who get a rise from stronger forms of cum control and milking. Part Five will conclude the series... with the friends made to do combat in a bizarre arena; Mike and Craig subjugated; and first-person narrator Skeeter made to *perform* in a ritual of erotic domination. Without giving anything away, I'll also mention that Master Mezmer's World of Wonders is going to help Skeeter... in a maybe unexpected way.
3/25/21, 5:06 AM
Great story so far. Like Hypnothrill said, very much reminded me of old Hyptrance stuff, with a sexier/hotter twist on the action. Hope to see the rest soon. Thanks for sharing.
3/25/21, 1:51 AM
What a well-written and hot story! I look forward to the next chapter.
3/25/21, 1:43 AM
Remarkable. I do hope there will be more of this. I would love to see where the author takes the story.
3/25/21, 12:34 AM
Thank you Udems and Retrofantasia for the kind comments! I'm pleased that you liked it!