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3/25/21, 6:20 AM
So HOT!
3/25/21, 6:16 AM
Hi, Essex! I'm glad you're enjoying "Carnival Trance"! I wasn't sure whether it would hit a chord, so it's terrific to hear you like it! Part Four is close at hand. The carnival mesmerist is going to open THIS night's show by demonstrating that boys who obey even the simplest commands feel pleasure. Then he'll take the three friends to a scene that fans of robots, drones, and such like might like to read, as well as those who get a rise from stronger forms of cum control and milking. Part Five will conclude the series... with the friends made to do combat in a bizarre arena; Mike and Craig subjugated; and first-person narrator Skeeter made to *perform* in a ritual of erotic domination. Without giving anything away, I'll also mention that Master Mezmer's World of Wonders is going to help Skeeter... in a maybe unexpected way.
3/25/21, 5:06 AM
Great story so far. Like Hypnothrill said, very much reminded me of old Hyptrance stuff, with a sexier/hotter twist on the action. Hope to see the rest soon. Thanks for sharing.
3/25/21, 1:51 AM
What a well-written and hot story! I look forward to the next chapter.
3/25/21, 1:43 AM
Remarkable. I do hope there will be more of this. I would love to see where the author takes the story.
3/25/21, 12:34 AM
Thank you Udems and Retrofantasia for the kind comments! I'm pleased that you liked it!
Dec 24, 2014
3/25/21, 12:08 AM
liked story but want to c its end.....what about the brother?
3/24/21, 11:19 PM
gutted you haven't uploaded part two yet! heres hoping you haven't forgot :)
3/24/21, 11:12 PM
Great story. I like your choice of animals. I hate to write negative things, but before I do, your English is very good, no different than a native speaker. But the lack of punctuation is distracting. The story is well written but needs the punctuation to set the pace and define the details.
3/24/21, 9:46 PM
Thank you 😊