Recent Comments

3/25/21, 1:43 AM
Remarkable. I do hope there will be more of this. I would love to see where the author takes the story.
3/25/21, 12:34 AM
Thank you Udems and Retrofantasia for the kind comments! I'm pleased that you liked it!
Dec 24, 2014
3/25/21, 12:08 AM
liked story but want to c its end.....what about the brother?
3/24/21, 11:19 PM
gutted you haven't uploaded part two yet! heres hoping you haven't forgot :)
3/24/21, 11:12 PM
Great story. I like your choice of animals. I hate to write negative things, but before I do, your English is very good, no different than a native speaker. But the lack of punctuation is distracting. The story is well written but needs the punctuation to set the pace and define the details.
3/24/21, 9:46 PM
Thank you 😊
3/24/21, 9:45 PM
so far my favorite!
3/24/21, 9:31 PM
Enjoyed this very hot continuation of the story.
3/24/21, 9:28 PM
loved the story! very well thought out, descriptive & hot. bring on the next chapt plz.....
3/24/21, 9:22 PM
This is extremely hot!