Recent Comments

3/24/21, 4:06 PM
I really like this story so far. It reminds me a lot of stuff that Hyptrance used to write back in the mid-2000s. I just wish you'd opted for a different release strategy, rather than posting all three chapters (totaling 15,000 words) at once.
3/24/21, 3:47 PM
The typos were a little distracting, and some of the descriptors used felt a little lazy and awkward, but the story was really fun and compelling nonetheless. I definitely came hard. I can't wait to read more, and hit me up if you need an editor, okay?
3/24/21, 1:31 PM
This is ADORABLE! You describe Jon so perfectly--God, he sounds like an ideal guy--and his sweet, genuine, wonderful personality makes him even better. The fact that he's been tricked into giving oral sex for so long is kind of hilarious (although it's sad that people have been taking advantage of his naivete for so long...). I hope that Theo can teach Jon a few "facts of life" and make him more worldly, without Jon losing his pure heart. :D
3/24/21, 1:17 PM
yes. yes yes yes
3/24/21, 12:28 PM
Cute, funny story!
3/24/21, 12:06 PM
Hilarious
Dan
3/24/21, 11:44 AM
Love this story so much! As well as some of your others. I have a rather odd question, so these people (in most of your stories) have had some kind of mind control or brain washing happening. What happens if the person that does it to them dies? Do they get realised or are they stuck in that mind controlled state forever? It doesn't impact the story at all but just a question I had!! :)
Ravenclaw
3/24/21, 10:01 AM
was fag really necessary? but really enjoyed it until then.
3/24/21, 7:43 AM
Can we get an episode of this story where Pauly goes to the frat party and takes it from all the big dumb jocks? :D
3/24/21, 7:01 AM
Has this been published somewhere else? Very hot, but I feel like I've read it before.