Recent Comments

3/24/21, 8:42 PM
Hey, Hypnothrill! Thank you for your kind comments. As to release strategy, I very much indeed hesitated to put all this material out at once. However, after posting Part One and Part Two, I tossed and turned and was really worried that those opening Parts are rather slow. They're slow, in my opinion, because, right the way through Part Two, the eroticism isn't yet really obvious, more just beneath the surface, and I know that most readers -- including myself oftentimes! -- are impatient to get to the action. So I went back and added Part Three. Because, in Part Three, Skeeter definitely gets some action! Thank you for having read! Cheers, Logan
3/24/21, 8:36 PM
Dear Hew Mesmer -- Bingo! That's *exactly* what was in my mind! Or *very* close to it! Master Mezmer is very much the Boris Karloff-style weird but proper gentleman. Also, it's reassuring that you liked the way the story opens. I'm a little worried that "Carnival Trance" takes some time for the action to heat up, because, like me sometimes, many readers are impatient. Part Two (now posted) continues at a measured pace -- though Mike DOES end up ... changed. And all three boys end up... eager. Eager to return to the carnival... It's in Part Three (also now posted) that the Master starts to draw Skeeter out of his shell, in much more erotic ways. Thank you for having reading Part One! Cheers, Logan
3/24/21, 8:21 PM
This was a delightfully atmospheric and inventive piece. The setting and gentlemanly, yet strange, hypnotist remind me of the films of Boris Karloff. I'm excited for the next installments!
Anonymous
3/24/21, 4:51 PM
its from his tumblr "slutty naughty jock". he has been reposting the stories from there.
Jul 28, 2005
3/24/21, 4:41 PM
amazing! I like it and i want to be Dan.
3/24/21, 4:06 PM
I really like this story so far. It reminds me a lot of stuff that Hyptrance used to write back in the mid-2000s. I just wish you'd opted for a different release strategy, rather than posting all three chapters (totaling 15,000 words) at once.
3/24/21, 3:47 PM
The typos were a little distracting, and some of the descriptors used felt a little lazy and awkward, but the story was really fun and compelling nonetheless. I definitely came hard. I can't wait to read more, and hit me up if you need an editor, okay?
3/24/21, 1:31 PM
This is ADORABLE! You describe Jon so perfectly--God, he sounds like an ideal guy--and his sweet, genuine, wonderful personality makes him even better. The fact that he's been tricked into giving oral sex for so long is kind of hilarious (although it's sad that people have been taking advantage of his naivete for so long...). I hope that Theo can teach Jon a few "facts of life" and make him more worldly, without Jon losing his pure heart. :D
3/24/21, 1:17 PM
yes. yes yes yes
3/24/21, 12:28 PM
Cute, funny story!