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3/23/21, 3:31 PM
That's a fair critique. I knew that this short concluding chapter was going to seem like an anticlimax to some readers, and so I debated on whether to just break the story up into two parts (as I already had this ending written when I posted Part 2). But I felt like the story divided naturally by days, and I liked leaving the readers in suspense at the end of Day 2.
nyan
3/23/21, 3:19 PM
This is funny as fuck i need more
3/23/21, 3:04 PM
yeah I agree, i was really excited after the first 2 chapters, this came out of nowhere and went real quick. Shame
3/23/21, 3:02 PM
that was....wayyy too abrupt after the first two amazing set up.
Anonymous
3/23/21, 2:44 PM
totally hot!!!
3/23/21, 1:15 PM
Is this a repost? or just the first time this has been posted here / i read this elsewhere. Either way, great read.
3/23/21, 12:57 PM
I'll echo previous sentiments and say the final method of conversion is not to my tastes but I appreciate the variation you put into that aspect of your stories and I did like it as a somewhat accelerated method of converting Ben, compared to the more gradual change that his step-family went through. Regardless of whether your next story is a sequel to this series, one of your previous series, or something completely new, I'll definitely be checking out whatever it is.
3/23/21, 11:18 AM
Overall the story was good. I didn't always enjoy photos embedded in stories before, but clearly it was because they were not expertly curated by you. The vehicle to finish the conversion was not really my thing, but wasn't terrible. I suppose characters can only get brainwashed/etc via semen so many times.... Overall still one of the best writers on here and can't wait for the next one. :-)
3/23/21, 10:53 AM
Although the manner of conversion isn't exactly my thing, the overall story and pics are very hot. Great work!
3/23/21, 9:54 AM
Say, I really like this. We rarely see such clear allegory on here, and it's refreshing! What a clever idea. :D