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3/23/21, 6:40 PM
I personally don't mind the final conversion method for Ben. Though I would echo a bit some of the other comments that it was a bit too easy and too quick compared to the gradual transformation of the other two. I also think that approach could open a totally separate conversion storyline based on the watersports play. But other than that, the overall story is another standard high quality product of yours once again, so thumbs up to it in general! I'll sure be looking forward to a sequel of this! With the premise of a tainted well and a planned B&B, I can see many possibilities where this could go... ;)
3/23/21, 6:12 PM
There was a mixup with formatting, this is chapter two of a story lol
Art
3/23/21, 6:09 PM
This begs for a continuation. Would be extremely hot having the rugby team controlled by the swim team. the part about "Kent mid fucked me and I mind fucked him" was confusing. Perhaps a little back story would be in order before continuing.
Oct 16, 2006
3/23/21, 5:42 PM
I hadn't really thought about it. What would you want to see happen to poor TB?
3/23/21, 5:10 PM
Great story - I would love to be taken unawares like that...
3/23/21, 5:08 PM
love the premise, a change of awareness is always diabolically hot. i just wish there was more build up and it was longer lol. awesome story!
3/23/21, 4:39 PM
This was/IS SO hot! love it!
Diz
3/23/21, 4:29 PM
Oooo I like. These kinda of aware changes are so hot to read
3/23/21, 4:04 PM
I would love to be one of the boys on the stage
3/23/21, 4:02 PM
Fun story! I was just a little confused by Henry's admission that "Kent mindfucked me and I mindfucked him."