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3/23/21, 9:54 AM
Say, I really like this. We rarely see such clear allegory on here, and it's refreshing! What a clever idea. :D
Anonymous
3/23/21, 7:51 AM
if you stop drinking does the effect wear off?!? where did Ben leave his "clean" water bottles?!? did anything happen to them?!? will the pump ever be repaired and the water flow again?!? why did Ben just accept the sounds coming from Parkers room?!? not only is the story hot - i find all the possibilities it creates such a turn on too!!! can't wait for the next installment... but for now - i'll just drink more water...
3/23/21, 7:34 AM
hot stuff
3/23/21, 4:39 AM
Everything about this is awesome. The lead-in chapter reads like a real good travelogue, made all the better by the expectations you gently seed here and there. When the men get to the island and there's this doctor there, that triggers a whole bunch of possibilities for mind-altered sex-frenzy. And what happens next perfectly satisfies all expectations--and then some! Like in your other stories, you are just *brilliant* at showing the inner workings of the trance-victim's mind. Kyle's slippage into the effects of the island, the fruit, etc... You evoke this all so well! Thanks for having written this!
3/23/21, 4:32 AM
I really LOVE stories where the mind control is accomplished through a "betrayal" of the body! Really hope to see Sam continue to struggle as he confronts his step-brother and his body once again leads him into getting fucked all over...
3/23/21, 3:51 AM
The picture you paint of Dixon's obedience-soaked inner mind is incredibly hot! As for the circle-jerk, it would have been hot even with non-tranced dudes. Knowing that the dudes in THIS circle were STAMPED with obedience, however, made it way, way hotter!
3/23/21, 3:28 AM
Hey, Dace! Hey, other kind-commentator (whose profile name isn't showing above)! I'm just catching up with your messages, and want to say "thank you"! I've got some ideas floating around and will try to hammer them out before long!
3/23/21, 2:35 AM
Hehe would love to see how he is force fed by a funnel... gallons of water being pumped through his system hehe
Scott
3/23/21, 2:18 AM
hope more of the story develops.
Jockmorphr
3/23/21, 2:10 AM
I'm not sure how missed this story, but I absolutely loved it! I would love to see another story in this universe, perhaps following these characters or following a different set of characters who also cross paths with "the manager".