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Just Some Dude
8/17/22, 10:09 PM
Damn how are you gonna let some guy named Carl turn you into a whore 😭😭😭

8/18/22, 1:19 AM
@Just Some Dude Triggered latent impulses and went along for the ride :kissing_heart:

Anonymous
2/8/25, 10:51 AM
@Just Some Dude Yes luv to be trained and used
Anonymous
2/8/25, 8:58 AM
Really awesome story. Everytime I read it I flood my grips!! The morning after will be a trip!
2/6/25, 3:48 PM
Very hot sex scene. Excited to see what comes next. I also wonder what porn looks like in this version of the world…

2/7/25, 1:55 AM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) Thank you so much! We may just find out in the future ;) Also, just wanted to say that I'm a big fan of your work!

2/8/25, 6:25 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Well it’s very kind to call my smattering of unfinished stories “work,” but I’ll take the compliment. Thank you!
Jan 17, 2024
2/8/25, 5:40 AM
Would love to see more stories in this setting!
Dec 20, 2008
WaffleBoy
2/8/25, 5:21 AM
Super hot!! Can't wait for more😋😋
2/8/25, 4:17 AM
I loved the original "Joaquin" but this version is fantastic. I like that Joachin was an active participant in his deflowering. I can't wait to see how this storyline develops — the original 2nd chapter didn't really grab me. If you're going to be revising and reissuing some of your older stories, I hope you'll include "Outrageous Fortune" — always one of my favorites!
2/8/25, 1:28 AM
Really loved this introduction. Great characters, you have a flow to your writing that is really enjoyable. I can't wait for the next chapters.
2/8/25, 12:26 AM
Okay, ya got me …
2/7/25, 11:12 PM
The end version of the chapter was so cool, thanks for sharing
2/7/25, 10:45 PM
Thanks for your feedback. I will go through the story again slowly and explicitly check for such continuity problems.