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3/23/21, 4:39 PM
This was/IS SO hot! love it!
Diz
3/23/21, 4:29 PM
Oooo I like. These kinda of aware changes are so hot to read
3/23/21, 4:04 PM
I would love to be one of the boys on the stage
3/23/21, 4:02 PM
Fun story! I was just a little confused by Henry's admission that "Kent mindfucked me and I mindfucked him."
Anonymous
3/23/21, 3:54 PM
Really enjoyed this! Hope you write more of it.
3/23/21, 3:50 PM
As others have said, the conversion method is not for me; watersports just aren't my thing. It's still a very well-written story, though, and the complete change in Ben's personality is stunning! And finally, I give you credit for being unafraid to try new kinks and tricks, Hypnothrill; "Dreamland Towers" comes to mind as another different avenue for you. That takes courage as an author, and you certainly have it! :)
3/23/21, 3:31 PM
That's a fair critique. I knew that this short concluding chapter was going to seem like an anticlimax to some readers, and so I debated on whether to just break the story up into two parts (as I already had this ending written when I posted Part 2). But I felt like the story divided naturally by days, and I liked leaving the readers in suspense at the end of Day 2.
nyan
3/23/21, 3:19 PM
This is funny as fuck i need more
3/23/21, 3:04 PM
yeah I agree, i was really excited after the first 2 chapters, this came out of nowhere and went real quick. Shame
3/23/21, 3:02 PM
that was....wayyy too abrupt after the first two amazing set up.