Recent Comments

3/23/21, 12:57 PM
I'll echo previous sentiments and say the final method of conversion is not to my tastes but I appreciate the variation you put into that aspect of your stories and I did like it as a somewhat accelerated method of converting Ben, compared to the more gradual change that his step-family went through. Regardless of whether your next story is a sequel to this series, one of your previous series, or something completely new, I'll definitely be checking out whatever it is.
3/23/21, 11:18 AM
Overall the story was good. I didn't always enjoy photos embedded in stories before, but clearly it was because they were not expertly curated by you. The vehicle to finish the conversion was not really my thing, but wasn't terrible. I suppose characters can only get brainwashed/etc via semen so many times.... Overall still one of the best writers on here and can't wait for the next one. :-)
3/23/21, 10:53 AM
Although the manner of conversion isn't exactly my thing, the overall story and pics are very hot. Great work!
3/23/21, 9:54 AM
Say, I really like this. We rarely see such clear allegory on here, and it's refreshing! What a clever idea. :D
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3/23/21, 7:51 AM
if you stop drinking does the effect wear off?!? where did Ben leave his "clean" water bottles?!? did anything happen to them?!? will the pump ever be repaired and the water flow again?!? why did Ben just accept the sounds coming from Parkers room?!? not only is the story hot - i find all the possibilities it creates such a turn on too!!! can't wait for the next installment... but for now - i'll just drink more water...
3/23/21, 7:34 AM
hot stuff
3/23/21, 4:39 AM
Everything about this is awesome. The lead-in chapter reads like a real good travelogue, made all the better by the expectations you gently seed here and there. When the men get to the island and there's this doctor there, that triggers a whole bunch of possibilities for mind-altered sex-frenzy. And what happens next perfectly satisfies all expectations--and then some! Like in your other stories, you are just *brilliant* at showing the inner workings of the trance-victim's mind. Kyle's slippage into the effects of the island, the fruit, etc... You evoke this all so well! Thanks for having written this!
3/23/21, 4:32 AM
I really LOVE stories where the mind control is accomplished through a "betrayal" of the body! Really hope to see Sam continue to struggle as he confronts his step-brother and his body once again leads him into getting fucked all over...
3/23/21, 3:51 AM
The picture you paint of Dixon's obedience-soaked inner mind is incredibly hot! As for the circle-jerk, it would have been hot even with non-tranced dudes. Knowing that the dudes in THIS circle were STAMPED with obedience, however, made it way, way hotter!
3/23/21, 3:28 AM
Hey, Dace! Hey, other kind-commentator (whose profile name isn't showing above)! I'm just catching up with your messages, and want to say "thank you"! I've got some ideas floating around and will try to hammer them out before long!