Recent Comments

3/23/21, 4:32 AM
I really LOVE stories where the mind control is accomplished through a "betrayal" of the body! Really hope to see Sam continue to struggle as he confronts his step-brother and his body once again leads him into getting fucked all over...
3/23/21, 3:51 AM
The picture you paint of Dixon's obedience-soaked inner mind is incredibly hot! As for the circle-jerk, it would have been hot even with non-tranced dudes. Knowing that the dudes in THIS circle were STAMPED with obedience, however, made it way, way hotter!
3/23/21, 3:28 AM
Hey, Dace! Hey, other kind-commentator (whose profile name isn't showing above)! I'm just catching up with your messages, and want to say "thank you"! I've got some ideas floating around and will try to hammer them out before long!
3/23/21, 2:35 AM
Hehe would love to see how he is force fed by a funnel... gallons of water being pumped through his system hehe
Scott
3/23/21, 2:18 AM
hope more of the story develops.
Jockmorphr
3/23/21, 2:10 AM
I'm not sure how missed this story, but I absolutely loved it! I would love to see another story in this universe, perhaps following these characters or following a different set of characters who also cross paths with "the manager".
3/23/21, 1:41 AM
Enough. turn him into someone and something interesting. This is just a cartoon gone bad.
3/23/21, 1:40 AM
Great sci-fi, reminded me a bit of Minority Report (the TV series, not the movie). It's too bad the future still has so much discrimination, but I suppose it's analogous to the hatred and fear directed at the Mutants in the X-men universe. Hope you write a sequel, I'd like for Louis to get some serious comeuppance and for Zander's brother to find him alive and, if not necessarily well, at least healthy given all the protein shots he's probably received in the 3 months since he was detained.
3/23/21, 1:36 AM
Hot!
3/23/21, 1:12 AM
Thanks for the positive comments so far. Definitely planning on continuing the story! I also made an edit today to fix the mistake noticed by PEN15LUVR.