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2/9/25, 12:36 AM
Wow, a great chapter! Yousef is getting closer to our resident hocky bear. The primacy of the wolf over the man due to the full moon is presumably why he did not recognize his own father as one of the mondjugen. But I'm sure there will be some very awkward conversations come dawn... I wonder how wolves view the incestuous couplings that doubtless happened. Tom has gone AWOL... I wonder how the tragedy of not being able to reconcile with his daughter is going to impact his relationship with Larry. I want another perspective from inside Pete's mind... I'm curious to get a deeper work to see how different his enthrallment to Alpha Ruiz has made him. The thing about his eyes less bright is a little strange. Alphas seem to be having very high turn-over rates recently. Two assassinations... based on everybody's reactions, that seems extremely rare. What exactly is going on? And the Wolf King is going to be back soon, to collect his seer...
nycboot
2/9/25, 12:13 AM
It's taken me a while to read the previous chapter and this. Your story is really magnificent (I admit, in part because I predicted aspects of it). It's so wonderful because your characterizations are so detailed and believable (up to the superpower stuff), and of course the surprises (I keep thinking Red Hawk's necklace is going to play a role, although you've not set it up that way). I always feel with other stories that the chapters are way too short. With you I felt they were a good length, but now I find myself pausing between chapters to digest and think about the characters and events. I admit to being fearful that you might contradict all that you've led up to and have a downer of a conclusion (e.g. Colt going over to Leviathan's side), but so far you've had some great outcomes. Thanks so much for sharing your unique vision!

2/9/25, 12:18 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Thank you so much...and spoiler...colt is not going over to the other side. Not happening. I promise...more bad things will probably happen, but I am a big happy end person...to an extent.
2/8/25, 11:38 PM
After reading this story to this point, i realize how deep i could be into giving myself up to coercive consensual non-consent sex to a Dominant like Sammy. i can't imagine how any form of sex could be any hotter than being worked over like this until my body and my mind are putty in the hands of a Master. This seems kind of like experiencing Stockholm syndrome at the hands of friends with special benefits.
2/8/25, 10:41 PM
Masterful. GREAT story!!!
pmk
12/5/23, 10:37 PM
Will you continue this? I'd love to read more.

12/5/23, 11:19 PM
@[pmk](/user/show/976276) I will! I haven't made much time for writing this year because of some personal setbacks, but I do have a scaffold for some further plot and sex here!

2/8/25, 9:07 PM
@[pmk](/user/show/976276) New chapter up! Enjoy!
Diendota
10/12/24, 4:12 PM
Sad to see this great story isn't updated is there a patreon or other that we could support?

10/12/24, 4:21 PM
There is another chapter in the works! Might be a bit, as I've had things going in my life recently, but it's about half-written. Hopefully in a month or so!

2/8/25, 9:05 PM
@Diendota check it out - new chapter! Hope you enjoy!
Feb 7, 2025
2/8/25, 8:36 PM
Great story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter
2/8/25, 7:57 PM
Great start! I can't wait to see what Vance and Colin have in store for Jed and the narrator.
2/8/25, 5:36 AM
Great story. I'm glad to see a happy ending in this version. Means i won't have to write my own happy ending to the original story anymore... right? (And to be clear, the original version is good, i just like happy endings)

2/8/25, 6:46 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) It is not the ending of the story, I will do the rest of it (but I may need to do an alternative account to upload it)

Pcm
2/8/25, 6:50 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Glad you like it. You have darkblade2814 to thank for the relatively happy ending. Anyway, Im curious what your version of happy ending for thw original universe qould be.

2/8/25, 7:47 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) it is complicated, as there is JSN's south arc and the North arc I'm planing, so I would need to take the south arc into account to see what a happy ending would look like

2/8/25, 7:42 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I first thought of it when you released the chapter where Gilbert transformed, so i don't remember all the details, but basically the first half was the same, but when Gilbert talks to the Wolf King he makes it where the Easterners can choose to be transformed, keep more of their identities, and he keeps more of his personality, much like in this one. The westerners would also get back clarity and be allowed to choose whether they were transformed or not. Also i think Rolf (whichever twin was in love with an Easterner) transforms back into a human (though he keeps the same urges) and pledges to stay that way until his beloved chooses of her own free will to join the Western pack. Basically less of an emphasis on assimilation and the erasure of identity, more emphasis on the positive masculinity of the West without going full blown monster (though obviously keeping some of it because its hot) and less of a sense that the family's love for each other ruined them. (And again, theres nothing wrong with that, i just have different preferences; and since you're the actual writer and i never actually wrote it, my opinions don't matter)