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Jan 31, 2016
Ravenclaw
3/22/21, 2:52 AM
Really hoped for Noah to come out on top and get Tyler. For being a nerd he was really stupid leaving greg alone when he knew about the stuff in the water. That ruined the story for me.
3/22/21, 1:45 AM
The prospect of the Machine transforming yet others into *its* slaves is a great way to conclude! And you definitely planted the seed of that idea earlier, which is deft story-telling! Thank you very much for having written this amazing series.
3/22/21, 1:38 AM
RoboticXperiment03 makes a great point! Your writing is so clear and so calm, and that makes your words the perfect tool to arouse the reader -- perfect stimuli, and no distraction. The action in this chapter is hyper-hot. Machine control and turning a guy into a mechanized slave are major turn-ons for me, but they don't work for me if they are overly specific or heavy-handed. The details that you describe, you describe at the exact right pitch!
3/22/21, 1:25 AM
Re-reading this story now that I've read the preceding ones, it's even better! The hypno-draining protocol, paradoxically, has **filled** me -- namely, with more wank material than I've read or watched in ages!
3/22/21, 1:18 AM
Another phenomenal chapter. The way the slave's real-time action gets invaded by Machine directives is incredibly arousing. The slave seems barely able to distinguish Machine "hyperreality" from his/its real-time life. You're entering the realm of truly scary-hot! (That's a compliment!)
3/22/21, 1:07 AM
The notion of an implanted fixation -- here, the oral fixation -- is incredibly hot. I'm totally drawn into the mental process that you describe -- the process of the subject's mind being "fucked open," as you express it. Reading your prose is like sliding into trance.
3/22/21, 12:55 AM
The situation that you describe is incredibly hot. And the words you use to describe it are themselves hypnotic. Your Machine is definitely having its desired effect on ME!
3/22/21, 12:21 AM
is there more? not sure how i feel about last part.....do i want to continue? part of me is intrigued by what is to come yet the other part of me wants to move on to the next story.....we'll just have to wait & c. for now though it is 50/50 for me
3/22/21, 12:08 AM
This is absolutely awesome! It is the first of this series that I've read. My priority is to read the others. Immediately.
3/22/21, 12:02 AM
I think this is a fantastic story! There is so much potential in the premise to explore and I feel like it demands a sequel in which Codec's in-some-ways-limitless powers are tested by a villain of equal stature. I agree with Viridian on the excellent world-building and original ideas.