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3/22/21, 1:18 AM
Another phenomenal chapter. The way the slave's real-time action gets invaded by Machine directives is incredibly arousing. The slave seems barely able to distinguish Machine "hyperreality" from his/its real-time life. You're entering the realm of truly scary-hot! (That's a compliment!)
3/22/21, 1:07 AM
The notion of an implanted fixation -- here, the oral fixation -- is incredibly hot. I'm totally drawn into the mental process that you describe -- the process of the subject's mind being "fucked open," as you express it. Reading your prose is like sliding into trance.
3/22/21, 12:55 AM
The situation that you describe is incredibly hot. And the words you use to describe it are themselves hypnotic. Your Machine is definitely having its desired effect on ME!
3/22/21, 12:21 AM
is there more? not sure how i feel about last part.....do i want to continue? part of me is intrigued by what is to come yet the other part of me wants to move on to the next story.....we'll just have to wait & c. for now though it is 50/50 for me
3/22/21, 12:08 AM
This is absolutely awesome! It is the first of this series that I've read. My priority is to read the others. Immediately.
3/22/21, 12:02 AM
I think this is a fantastic story! There is so much potential in the premise to explore and I feel like it demands a sequel in which Codec's in-some-ways-limitless powers are tested by a villain of equal stature. I agree with Viridian on the excellent world-building and original ideas.
The Author
3/21/21, 11:38 PM
Thanks all for commenting so far. I left it open for a sequel, so if there is enough interest, I could come back to this one. @boi98229, thanks for posting your thoughts and reaction to the story. I was sorry to hear that you found some of the elements of it too close to real world evil to enjoy those parts. Although, as you note, the story is fastastical; I didn't have a specific real world analogue in mind, rather I thought that covering up for a conspiracy would be a plausible motivation for some of the things that the characters say and do.
Anonymous
3/21/21, 11:36 PM
this was so delightfully charming, i love it.
KKA
3/21/21, 11:13 PM
such a cute, lovely story. I enjoy even in the grammar and vernacular that you are committed to your genre and period. Looking forward to seeing more!
3/21/21, 11:11 PM
dman i dreaming of being him please do another chaptger