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2/6/25, 3:48 PM
Very hot sex scene. Excited to see what comes next. I also wonder what porn looks like in this version of the world…

2/7/25, 1:55 AM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) Thank you so much! We may just find out in the future ;) Also, just wanted to say that I'm a big fan of your work!

2/8/25, 6:25 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Well it’s very kind to call my smattering of unfinished stories “work,” but I’ll take the compliment. Thank you!
Jan 17, 2024
2/8/25, 5:40 AM
Would love to see more stories in this setting!
Dec 20, 2008
WaffleBoy
2/8/25, 5:21 AM
Super hot!! Can't wait for more😋😋
2/8/25, 4:17 AM
I loved the original "Joaquin" but this version is fantastic. I like that Joachin was an active participant in his deflowering. I can't wait to see how this storyline develops — the original 2nd chapter didn't really grab me. If you're going to be revising and reissuing some of your older stories, I hope you'll include "Outrageous Fortune" — always one of my favorites!
2/8/25, 1:28 AM
Really loved this introduction. Great characters, you have a flow to your writing that is really enjoyable. I can't wait for the next chapters.
2/8/25, 12:26 AM
Okay, ya got me …
2/7/25, 11:12 PM
The end version of the chapter was so cool, thanks for sharing
2/7/25, 10:45 PM
Thanks for your feedback. I will go through the story again slowly and explicitly check for such continuity problems.
2/7/25, 10:26 PM
You’ve got attention with this one. Can’t wait to see more.
2/7/25, 10:20 PM
I wanted to say, even though I’m sure it won’t stay this high…the ratings for this chapter made me feel very happy. As they have for the entire story. I honestly hope everyone has enjoyed. I have finished the draft of the final chapter. And the epilogue. Once they are gone over they will come up. Hopefully Sunday for the last chapter and the epilogue the next week. Rocky and friends have a lot more to go through before the end. But the final battles are closing in!