Recent Comments

The Author
3/21/21, 11:38 PM
Thanks all for commenting so far. I left it open for a sequel, so if there is enough interest, I could come back to this one. @boi98229, thanks for posting your thoughts and reaction to the story. I was sorry to hear that you found some of the elements of it too close to real world evil to enjoy those parts. Although, as you note, the story is fastastical; I didn't have a specific real world analogue in mind, rather I thought that covering up for a conspiracy would be a plausible motivation for some of the things that the characters say and do.
Anonymous
3/21/21, 11:36 PM
this was so delightfully charming, i love it.
KKA
3/21/21, 11:13 PM
such a cute, lovely story. I enjoy even in the grammar and vernacular that you are committed to your genre and period. Looking forward to seeing more!
3/21/21, 11:11 PM
dman i dreaming of being him please do another chaptger
Anonymous
3/21/21, 10:46 PM
or like Justin....will Noah have a much higher libido now and need to use it more too...even hooking up with Raul Question... can the notebook do anything else? like if he combined some other element with the dick size change, like he focused a lot on Justin's blonde hairiness and even stubble... could he combine both growing for example? or changing personality, seems that the stamina and libido are increasing in the guys he grew, but maybe elements of how they are and how they relate to others is too?
Mar 21, 2021
Mitch_CoRob
3/21/21, 10:00 PM
This is one of my favorite kinks and sensitive spots on me, myself. Great story. I hope there's more stories coming our way!
3/21/21, 9:28 PM
As always a great story Hypnothrill. Can't wait for the ending. I was half expecting him to be somewhat affected by showering. That he could be affected by the water without drinking it directly. At least enough to lower his defences. By now the only logical solution would be for the dad and brother to force some water down his troat. I would much rather have him slip up or be tricked into it rather than them using force. But I have faith in you Hypnothrill. I wonder if our trio will be happy just the three of them or if they are gonna share the water with others. Will Ben want to rekindle his relationship with his biological father and his half-brothers and serve them some nice water?
boi98229
3/21/21, 9:14 PM
The story idea was very original, and the story itself well written. The plot was exciting and the complication between tracking auras and strong sexual arousal was both intriguing and hot. My problem with it has less to do with the story itself than it does with how stressed I have been for some years now about right-wing, strong-arm, immoral, violent, even evil attitudes which have become so prevalent in the world. In spite of the original ideas and the acknowledged fantasy nature of the story, the existence a D Unit was just too closely analogous to the real evil I see in the world to be enjoyable. Given the nature of the competition defined by the requirement of "Fallen Hero", I won't be reading any further chapters of this story. I would apologize for my poor ratings, except i decided i was so biased through no fault of the author that it would be unfair for me to rate the story and adversely affect the author's chance of winning the competition. So i deleted all my ratings.
3/21/21, 9:11 PM
Yes yes yes! All that sexy facial hair! There are some times you refer to "you" instead of to Cameron. Other than that: keep it up, please!
Mar 21, 2021
Anonymous
3/21/21, 9:06 PM
Excellent