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Dec 20, 2008
WaffleBoy
2/8/25, 5:21 AM
Super hot!! Can't wait for more😋😋
2/8/25, 4:17 AM
I loved the original "Joaquin" but this version is fantastic. I like that Joachin was an active participant in his deflowering. I can't wait to see how this storyline develops — the original 2nd chapter didn't really grab me. If you're going to be revising and reissuing some of your older stories, I hope you'll include "Outrageous Fortune" — always one of my favorites!
2/8/25, 1:28 AM
Really loved this introduction. Great characters, you have a flow to your writing that is really enjoyable. I can't wait for the next chapters.
2/8/25, 12:26 AM
Okay, ya got me …
2/7/25, 11:12 PM
The end version of the chapter was so cool, thanks for sharing
2/7/25, 10:45 PM
Thanks for your feedback. I will go through the story again slowly and explicitly check for such continuity problems.
2/7/25, 10:26 PM
You’ve got attention with this one. Can’t wait to see more.
2/7/25, 10:20 PM
I wanted to say, even though I’m sure it won’t stay this high…the ratings for this chapter made me feel very happy. As they have for the entire story. I honestly hope everyone has enjoyed. I have finished the draft of the final chapter. And the epilogue. Once they are gone over they will come up. Hopefully Sunday for the last chapter and the epilogue the next week. Rocky and friends have a lot more to go through before the end. But the final battles are closing in!
Hypnofan
2/7/25, 9:58 PM
I really have enjoyed this. The first part hooked me and finally learning about Colt and his dad made me feel a little emotional. I hate that it is ending. But look forward to the conclusion!
2/7/25, 9:41 PM
Great. I'm looking forward to the continuation.