Recent Comments

3/21/21, 4:28 PM
That was an intense exercise in steady, persistent corruption! Re: identifying characters by their hair colour, I thought it might have been a little over-emphasised. Anyway I hope this story does really well in the contest!
3/21/21, 4:05 PM
I agree with the Hurried comment. I quite understand it as I do so myself. I want to get the story out and reviewed, then once on line, I see all the errors anyone else would have seen on first read. Also, I'm guessing this was written by speech-to-text or Google translate, given the semantic and grammar errors. I love the concept and progression and with a wee bit of editing would be a fantastic story. Good job, overall
3/21/21, 3:52 PM
Hot story! I recognise the style of this one, and I really enjoy many of your other works.
Anonymous
3/21/21, 3:35 PM
This story was so hot, thank you so much! With this being the happy ending, any chance for us to get a taste of the bad one?
BPtime
3/21/21, 3:32 PM
My estimate is that Ben won't make it. There's no way stopping the power of water. I bet he'll come to daddy. And then with daddy, and Parker. A nagging thought: what happened to the people that repaired the pump? Didn't they taste of the water? And if so, wouldn't they roam around in search for further hydration?
3/21/21, 2:53 PM
want to read more like this w/genie magic but unable to access patreon or buy anything since don't have debit/credit card......bummer
3/21/21, 2:43 PM
Ridiculously hot! Great first effort, and I hope a great start... LLOYD
TimTim
3/21/21, 2:20 PM
The hunger Chase has for the pollen at the end is hot! Can't wait for the next part and Chase becoming a beefy biker.
Anonymous
3/21/21, 1:43 PM
excellent
Martin
3/21/21, 1:39 PM
Very intriguing start! Can't wait to see where this is going to!