Recent Comments

3/21/21, 6:10 AM
can't wait for the next one
3/21/21, 5:14 AM
He's already so close, it's hot to anticipate what he's got coming, can't wait for him to give in.
3/21/21, 4:25 AM
like it especaly the feet and sock park would love have skin feet sock and boot heavy second part. best some banker or snooty collage kid getting into tough and musky roughneck skin
3/21/21, 4:23 AM
I feel like this one leaves me wanting more- what is the real truth of Spike, who is this man? Definitely a hot interaction and story though. The resistance and slow stripping away of that under the assumed hypnosis is pretty exciting actually.
3/21/21, 4:22 AM
Definitely feels like a good start to a story verse. Ethan and James seem like great characters and the writing was good- hot, paced well, and did a great job of making the obliviousness part of the draw.
3/21/21, 4:21 AM
Great story and loved the immersive element of the video file. Really hot and enjoyable, loving your stories so far!
3/21/21, 2:11 AM
Brilliant! Well done, and I join the chorus begging for more!
nyan
3/21/21, 1:16 AM
update please
3/21/21, 1:15 AM
Really hot. I'm liking the way its going so far as it seems realistic for the motivations. Only thing I would really like was of it expands outside if the family to include more cops. Would be great if Erik offered up his partner to take his place. Seems like the kinda scumbag move he would make or it could be part of breaking him down since his thing is the uniform. Cant imagine his partner would be a great guy if he sticks with Erik.
3/20/21, 10:58 PM
i just wish it was longer and more developed before others add their voice to your superior narrative.