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Anonymous
3/21/21, 1:43 PM
excellent
Martin
3/21/21, 1:39 PM
Very intriguing start! Can't wait to see where this is going to!
3/21/21, 1:21 PM
A great second part! I hope Chase gets huge!
3/21/21, 12:01 PM
hope you ll continue this storry also would be great if there will be a continuation of bob
Anonymous
3/21/21, 11:34 AM
Umph, everything about this really gets me going. Love the underwear briefs! Can't wait to see Ben submit and give himself to his Daddy!
3/21/21, 8:18 AM
this is a good story. I hope you do more.
3/21/21, 8:15 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! As always very good written. I would love to have read more about the varieties of visual and non-visual modifications. And I'm looking forward to see how Noel's and 107's life will be in the system .
3/21/21, 8:02 AM
another great chapter, even though id like to see more, understand that you need break from this. What i liked was that Vince has given his big brother a liking for leather, be good to see his cop uniform being turned into a leather cop uniform
3/21/21, 6:51 AM
looking forward to see where it goes!!
3/21/21, 6:24 AM
I love the premise here, but I get the feeling this story was written in a hurry. I noticed a lot of formatting errors and typos that made it hard to read. I also had a hard time getting invested in the characters (or even telling them apart), so their transformation into demons didn't mean very much to me. My advice would be to keep writing and look at the work of authors like Tom Gungy, who's really a master of this type of story; he knows how to build suspense, so that the corruption (when it inevitably comes) is exciting for the reader.