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EJG
3/20/21, 9:35 PM
This is not fair,leaving us to our imaginations
EJG
3/20/21, 9:32 PM
Oh well. I can only dwell the future in my fantasies
3/20/21, 9:29 PM
I'm excited for this -- bring it on! Mmmm... blue balls.
3/20/21, 9:22 PM
Great ideas in this beginning chapter! I look forward to where you take this story.
Jack
3/20/21, 7:19 PM
Fuck, this was hot. I'm so not into foot stuff, but I genuinely came while I was reading the interaction between Vincent and Erik. You're so good that you're making me like stuff I don't like! And the moment where Erik admitted that he regretted nothing, and so neither would Vincent? God, it was amazing. Quality writing once again. I mentioned this before, but it's so cathartic to read as these bastards get what's coming to them. There's so much more that can happen, and I'm genuinely excited to see where it goes. I'm sorry about life being shitty. It happens, but it's never fun. There isn't much I can do, other than compliment you and say that your writing ability continues to improve with every chapter. I'm happy to help you proofread the stories, if you would like. Let me know.
3/20/21, 7:17 PM
Well, the incest element isn't for me--never has been, never will be--but the slow mental change is, as ever, fantastic! And I love the humorous section of Ben trying to pretend to be stupefied as well (his saying "...uh...Daddy" reminds me of my own attempts at sexy talk). :p And hooray, the well is destroyed! Now everything will be perfectly fine and Ben definitely WON'T be reduced to a mindless musclehead. Yes, that is sarcasm. :p Great story, Hypnothrill! :D
Mindwhisperer
3/20/21, 7:12 PM
Good so far and certainly for a first effort. I agree with jitter that have a subject perform while thinking he is doing something different is always far hotter than just turning him into just another cocksucker.
Swizzington
3/20/21, 7:11 PM
Glad to hear people are still enjoying my works! To your question, Slave Academy and its sequel (considering them together as one holistic piece) is the story I enjoyed telling the most :-)
3/20/21, 6:58 PM
great story! I'd love to see what was actually in the bar and how it was doing all that too! thanks so much
Anonymous
3/20/21, 6:42 PM
this is my new favorite story on this site. thank you!