Recent Comments

3/21/21, 4:22 AM
Definitely feels like a good start to a story verse. Ethan and James seem like great characters and the writing was good- hot, paced well, and did a great job of making the obliviousness part of the draw.
3/21/21, 4:21 AM
Great story and loved the immersive element of the video file. Really hot and enjoyable, loving your stories so far!
3/21/21, 2:11 AM
Brilliant! Well done, and I join the chorus begging for more!
nyan
3/21/21, 1:16 AM
update please
3/21/21, 1:15 AM
Really hot. I'm liking the way its going so far as it seems realistic for the motivations. Only thing I would really like was of it expands outside if the family to include more cops. Would be great if Erik offered up his partner to take his place. Seems like the kinda scumbag move he would make or it could be part of breaking him down since his thing is the uniform. Cant imagine his partner would be a great guy if he sticks with Erik.
3/20/21, 10:58 PM
i just wish it was longer and more developed before others add their voice to your superior narrative.
3/20/21, 10:37 PM
I'm really digging this. I love gradual changes like this, and the more emphasis on man musk the better.
Anonymous
3/20/21, 10:08 PM
I loved this. Please keep going! I'm exited for the next one.
EJG
3/20/21, 9:35 PM
This is not fair,leaving us to our imaginations
EJG
3/20/21, 9:32 PM
Oh well. I can only dwell the future in my fantasies