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2/7/25, 10:20 PM
I wanted to say, even though I’m sure it won’t stay this high…the ratings for this chapter made me feel very happy. As they have for the entire story. I honestly hope everyone has enjoyed. I have finished the draft of the final chapter. And the epilogue. Once they are gone over they will come up. Hopefully Sunday for the last chapter and the epilogue the next week. Rocky and friends have a lot more to go through before the end. But the final battles are closing in!
Hypnofan
2/7/25, 9:58 PM
I really have enjoyed this. The first part hooked me and finally learning about Colt and his dad made me feel a little emotional. I hate that it is ending. But look forward to the conclusion!
2/7/25, 9:41 PM
Great. I'm looking forward to the continuation.
2/7/25, 8:43 PM
One of the quickest ways to know that AI is used is that a character, who was just naked and just had sex, is described to "unbuckle his belt" or "lower his pants" or "take off his shirt." In this story, for example, Zephyr has just fucked the straight out of both of the guys and then ... > The wizard slowly unbuttoned his shirt, revealing his chest, muscular and defined, with a trail of dark hair leading down to the waistband of his trousers. Aiden and Julian’s eyes widened, their mouths watering as they took in the sight of their master’s body. OK, so he might have still had a shirt on in the first section. > With a swift motion, **Zephyr pulled down his trousers, revealing his thick, veiny cock,** standing proudly at full attention. **Aiden and Julian’s eyes widened, their mouths watering as they took in the sight of their master’s impressive member**. The head of his cock glistened with pre-cum, the shaft growing harder by the second. This is what always takes me out of the story. Two guys just got fucked by this dick and then we basically replay that experience again including the clothing. I have no issue with AI - I use SpicyChat all the time - but watch for these kinds of continuity issues if you are going to use it for your story Hypnomic!
2/7/25, 8:23 PM
What will happen next? You can't stop now. Please give us more.

2/7/25, 8:25 PM
@[anoa](/user/show/10007607) I will, I will. So sorry for the sudden stop and delay.
2/7/25, 7:26 PM
The Aztecs were from México and the amazon Jungle is in south America. It's impossible to find Mexican artifacts in that jungle.

Taverick
2/7/25, 8:16 PM
@[Rainbow's Dreamer](/user/show/1224976) Corrected! Think my editor flipped that without me noticing. It was supposed to be Mayan.
2/7/25, 6:02 PM
Haven’t read it yet but I can’t wait. This was already one of my fav series of all time

2/7/25, 7:48 PM
@[texas95](/user/show/10020267) I hope you enjoy it when you read it! I recognize that the first few chapters of the 'first draft' a few years ago were really rough due to the state of AI at the time, and I'm feeling really optimistic about getting to take another run at it.
1/14/25, 12:02 AM
Aha! Finally some backstory on the neighbor. Always happy to see a new update.

2/7/25, 5:34 PM
@[yetanotheranonymous](/user/show/971894) Always great to hear from you!
2/7/25, 4:14 PM
absolutely cannot wait for part three. incredible story so far!
Anonymous
2/7/25, 4:12 PM
Wild how this is good enough to be a stand alone story, and there’s still more to come !