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3/20/21, 6:58 PM
great story! I'd love to see what was actually in the bar and how it was doing all that too! thanks so much
Anonymous
3/20/21, 6:42 PM
this is my new favorite story on this site. thank you!
Anonymous
3/20/21, 5:32 PM
I love to think of these poor guys just wearing this uniform constantly! Going to do some gardening, better but on the uniform! Off to the gym? Get your gym trousers on! On a date - get that smart polo on!
Anonymous
3/20/21, 5:22 PM
Love re Reading your stuff. Always gets me going like its brand new!! Onto slave academy now! :p what is the favourite bit of work you have published Swizzington?
3/20/21, 3:36 PM
Take all the time you need. We don't want writer burnout. For Eli, might I suggest not dumbing him down? Maybe he's the one who partially brake away from his reprogramming.
3/20/21, 3:35 PM
Superb isn't the right word, "fanfreakingtastic" is much much better! You are truly talented and I'm grateful I get to enjoy the fruits of your creative labor. Mars does seem like a good idea sometimes doesn't it? Hopefully the writing process is both cathartic and enjoyable for you so sending good vibes your way. This IS my favorite story on here!
Martin
3/20/21, 12:36 PM
... and to follow up my stupid little complaint: This story is really great and one of the best I've read in a long time! Thank you for a great wank ;)
BPtime
3/20/21, 12:15 PM
Serve us more! In water bottles if need be.
3/20/21, 11:18 AM
I hope there are more chapters as well! It is such a VERY hot story.
3/20/21, 9:55 AM
You'll likely like Part 3 more Thrill in terms of the horror aspect. I dunno if I view this specifically as a horror series, but there will be more horror aspects as the 'seeds' spread. I likely won't do any more flashbacks, because I don't really enjoy them overly much in text--that being said I wanted to show one flashback to demonstrate their brotherly love. If I did one for the other bikers, then well, it'd be a bit much. Ben you'll like part 3 :)