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3/20/21, 3:36 PM
Take all the time you need. We don't want writer burnout. For Eli, might I suggest not dumbing him down? Maybe he's the one who partially brake away from his reprogramming.
3/20/21, 3:35 PM
Superb isn't the right word, "fanfreakingtastic" is much much better! You are truly talented and I'm grateful I get to enjoy the fruits of your creative labor. Mars does seem like a good idea sometimes doesn't it? Hopefully the writing process is both cathartic and enjoyable for you so sending good vibes your way. This IS my favorite story on here!
Martin
3/20/21, 12:36 PM
... and to follow up my stupid little complaint: This story is really great and one of the best I've read in a long time! Thank you for a great wank ;)
BPtime
3/20/21, 12:15 PM
Serve us more! In water bottles if need be.
3/20/21, 11:18 AM
I hope there are more chapters as well! It is such a VERY hot story.
3/20/21, 9:55 AM
You'll likely like Part 3 more Thrill in terms of the horror aspect. I dunno if I view this specifically as a horror series, but there will be more horror aspects as the 'seeds' spread. I likely won't do any more flashbacks, because I don't really enjoy them overly much in text--that being said I wanted to show one flashback to demonstrate their brotherly love. If I did one for the other bikers, then well, it'd be a bit much. Ben you'll like part 3 :)
Ben
3/20/21, 9:46 AM
I liked it! You could maybe spend a bit more time on the transformation (part of the challenge of these stories is coming up with new ways to describe being pollinated, the pleasure and intoxication, and so forth), but I'm really looking forward to Part 3 - keep it up! :)
3/20/21, 9:09 AM
the wait is definitely worth it! you are killing it right now,this is one of my favorite series on this site these days. shame that I need to wait for the next chapter now xD I would read that whole thing in one sitting in a heartbeat. I probably will once it's completed keep up the good work,we appreciate it
3/20/21, 8:27 AM
I'm intrigued on how things will develop with Eli, I enjoy when smart characters are the enthralled ones and are not dumbed Down, there is a lot of ways to play with someone who is smart having so many confusing feelings, and It's very intriguing. I also gotta say that I really enjoyed how you described his utter confusion and Jealousy, I think his envy is a very strong defining character trait to explore and what I enjoyed the most is that so far aside from obviously Vincent, Eli is the most fully realized character to me, down to his feelings rather than fully changing just kinda switching his hatred and anger for Vincent into his father and also discovering how much he hates Erik makes me wonder if Vincent might use Eli to torture Erik if he ever were to "reward" Eli for anything, he'd be spiteful enough to get his kicks not only at obeying his baby brother, but also making his older brother suffer as well, middle child syndrome taken to extremes.
Anonymous
3/20/21, 8:20 AM
i was a bit confused by the start... i didn't realise it was a "before"... but after the "present" was hot... the mixture of the "traditional" pollination story and the care and love John shows Chase... plus very hot description of John's physical features and smell... thanks for sharing... and can't wait for the next part... i wanna join the motorcycle gang too!!!