Recent Comments

3/19/21, 11:12 PM
Great idea with the Aware mode. And very hotly told. This chapter made me like Erik. But watching him be aware of what he is to become was a great punishment that I enjoyed seeing. Actually, the only punishment I can see is for him to always be in the Aware mode or else he's enjoying it. So it is interesting how this will play out. I look forward to the next one (kind of bummed out I caught up and have to wait now)
Anonymous
3/19/21, 9:36 PM
This is one of the hottest stories on the entire site! And with such a lovely ending! Wow I loved every moment! Thank you
3/19/21, 9:18 PM
love the whole group slowly being corrupted into becoming gay.
3/19/21, 9:17 PM
this looks like a very promising series like this, would love to see more of Ethan and James
3/19/21, 8:51 PM
Hot. Someone send me a link, I want to post some selfies.
3/19/21, 8:48 PM
I generally loved this one, and I thought it had some very hot scenes of mental transformation. My one pet peeve was that the (apparently secular and progressive) "activist group" didn't seem to fit with some of the characterizations of Micah (giving a pro-abstinence speech) and Elijah (being very offended by profanity and sexual references). To me, the story would have made a LOT more sense if they were Christian or Mormon "do-gooders."
3/19/21, 8:34 PM
Hey folks - catching up on comments. Thank you so much for writing them! [@TransformHeaven](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/295209) - Believe it or not, I had three ideas for who the mysterious assgrabber was. I went with the one that felt the most earned. [@Buffy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/13727) - I don't think you're evil, just sexy ;) [@TaylorGuy](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10000710) - It's not likely anyone will be getting their smarts back. I understand it's a turnoff for some folks, but I've got to write my kinks the way I feel 'em. I've been trying hard to make sure not *everyone* in this story ends up as a brainless himbo. And yeah, it's safe to say there will be consequences. [@MrDick](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001656) - What if we did both? Twisted AND mushy? ;) [@Suited](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/78337) - That brings up an interesting question. Is Marc a natural gay man? Or did the ring make him gay? [@maggiemee88](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/911774) - Have you been reading my private notebook? [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - As you know, since the last chapter is up already, that's not quite what happens. It was *very* close to my original plan for the ending. The ex-boyfriend angle is something I wish I'd thought of! [@Proteus](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/961566) - Thanks! As Strunk & White says: omit needless words. I don't intend for this universe to be connected to any of my others. I don't like feeling like I have to remember rules from stories I wrote 10 years ago. [@DuskSkullKing](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001913) - Oooh... now there's an interesting possibility.
Dec 16, 2019
3/19/21, 8:17 PM
very hot. Keep this going. a submissive slut Dad is a good thing.
3/19/21, 8:02 PM
I always look forward to a new chapter ❣️ excited to read the next one. good work