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boi98229
3/20/21, 4:29 AM
I loved the story, but the story was too short. i thought you missed an opportunity to clarify the mind training done on Matt and Lindsay's exercise audio track. That aspect of the story was barely implied and very easy to miss. In fact i am still not entirely sure that you meant it that way. i really enjoy hypnosis so including the mind training aspect more explicitly and in more detail would have been hotter. The welcome Lindsay received on arrival, and his time spent on the sofa with the other guys was pretty hot, but also (to my own preference) could have included more detail. For example, did Neil doctor Lindsay's beer? With what, and what effect in addition to the expected effect of the alcohol in the beer. Spraying Lindsay with cum so they could strip him to wash his clothes was a nice touch. I thought that whole scene could have been expanded. Why didn't they suggest a circle jerk? That would have been one technique to arrange their starting to touch Lindsay in erotic ways. I am just throwing out ideas for ways in which this chapter could have been longer. When i read a good story, i just naturally never want it to end, so longer is better! Nevertheless shorter was really hot too! Thanks so much! P.S. It could also be made longer with lots more chapters! i would totally be into that.
3/20/21, 3:56 AM
oh my god i love this!!! hit all the right buttons
Elm
3/20/21, 3:19 AM
Its a good start! a little rough around the edges, but very solid first try :) I wanna see where you are going with this!
3/20/21, 3:18 AM
Loved every bit of this. Pressed every button. Everywhere. Thanks once again Derek. I really have to get my shit together and get back in the game too. Real world book research and writing is taking a lot of brain space. Maybe I should just write more porn.
3/20/21, 3:06 AM
I love a good demon story with a straight guy changed, it's so hot. You did a great job here and I am glad this story peeked my insterest enough to read.
3/20/21, 12:16 AM
what I hot story. I'm a sucker for a good chastity story.
3/19/21, 11:51 PM
I greatly enjoyed this very hot story.
3/19/21, 11:12 PM
Great idea with the Aware mode. And very hotly told. This chapter made me like Erik. But watching him be aware of what he is to become was a great punishment that I enjoyed seeing. Actually, the only punishment I can see is for him to always be in the Aware mode or else he's enjoying it. So it is interesting how this will play out. I look forward to the next one (kind of bummed out I caught up and have to wait now)