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3/19/21, 6:11 AM
the fact he was hypnotized into obsessively liking it while thinking he was doing something different and innocent is way hotter then just turning him gay! maybe you could do a part two with that same concept! looking for more from you!
Mar 13, 2021
Diz
3/19/21, 5:06 AM
Thank you folks :). I'm glad this kind of debauchery tickles your fancies.
3/19/21, 4:26 AM
Great work! I wish the chapters were a wee bit longer, looking forward to more
3/19/21, 1:59 AM
Such a wonderfully written and hot series, Derek! I like the way you concluded the story, bringing many of the characters together in the end.
3/19/21, 1:21 AM
Idk if u are still interested on this series but I found archives of the of two other Ice Bear’s stories u mentioned in a previous comment, just in case u want to continue Todd series or just for u to recover them WorkWife https://web.archive.org/web/20170917033251/http://mcstories.com/WorkWife/WorkWife.html Friend of a Friend https://web.archive.org/web/20170821075708/http://mcstories.com/FriendOfAFriend/FriendOfAFriend.html
3/19/21, 1:10 AM
are you ok?
3/19/21, 12:25 AM
Well done! I thought maybe Sam might be a bad guy, and the hint of the second ring made me think it might be him, but I didn’t expect things to go exactly as they did. I loved it. Nice and hot, and had well written story beats alongside the hot sex.
3/19/21, 12:00 AM
I, unsurprisingly, enjoyed this. The twist was clever, the conclusion was classic "friends are my power"/"love conquers all" nonsense that I'm a huge sucker for, and "did you read the instructions" was hilarious. The villian's end was very karmic and perfectly on theme; defeated because unlike Marc who wanted a connection but didn't know how to make one, he didn't want a connection he just wanted to control people. So now he's cursed to be forever unable to touch others. Marc's ending is interesting because he basically ended up as the opposite of who he'd been in the beginning. He started as an average looking introvert with a low Sex drive who seemed to do well in class but mostly blended in. He ended as a massive extrovert with a high Sex drive, unable to read, but standing out in every crowd (partly by being mostly naked). But he's also surrounded by friends who seem to generally care for him and make him happy. There's a lot there to unpack and i could go on forever about him or the other characters and what happened to them. I'll almost certainly be coming back to this story in the future. Great work.
3/18/21, 11:48 PM
This has been great!