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3/19/21, 12:25 AM
Well done! I thought maybe Sam might be a bad guy, and the hint of the second ring made me think it might be him, but I didn’t expect things to go exactly as they did. I loved it. Nice and hot, and had well written story beats alongside the hot sex.
3/19/21, 12:00 AM
I, unsurprisingly, enjoyed this. The twist was clever, the conclusion was classic "friends are my power"/"love conquers all" nonsense that I'm a huge sucker for, and "did you read the instructions" was hilarious. The villian's end was very karmic and perfectly on theme; defeated because unlike Marc who wanted a connection but didn't know how to make one, he didn't want a connection he just wanted to control people. So now he's cursed to be forever unable to touch others. Marc's ending is interesting because he basically ended up as the opposite of who he'd been in the beginning. He started as an average looking introvert with a low Sex drive who seemed to do well in class but mostly blended in. He ended as a massive extrovert with a high Sex drive, unable to read, but standing out in every crowd (partly by being mostly naked). But he's also surrounded by friends who seem to generally care for him and make him happy. There's a lot there to unpack and i could go on forever about him or the other characters and what happened to them. I'll almost certainly be coming back to this story in the future. Great work.
3/18/21, 11:48 PM
This has been great!
Mar 13, 2021
3/18/21, 11:30 PM
This is the best story I've read on here... You gotta write more!
Anonymous
3/18/21, 11:03 PM
Great series! It's been terrific seeing how the story developed over the last week or two!
3/18/21, 9:46 PM
I should have known that the too good to be true guy was in fact too good to be true. I do like the twist, and I liked that Marc was able to retain some smarts long enough to get Riley to read the phrase to nullify the rings. I didn't expect Sam to die, or at least become a ghost, and I'm happy about that, even though I could see a spin-off with him coming back or possessing a student. But my favorite part of the resolution was that the power of friendship saved the day. I will say, though, that I kind of wish Marc wasn't completely dumbed down. It is what he deserved given what he did to some of the guys he changed, so it wasn't unexpected. Regardless, I really enjoyed the story and look forward to coming back to reread it again. And I also look forward to whatever new story your brain comes up with. Well done!
3/18/21, 9:46 PM
Great series! Great ending! I was afraid he was gonna pull the cockring off and that was the source of the body morphing...
3/18/21, 9:16 PM
what ever happened to that second chapter?
3/18/21, 9:16 PM
Didn't see the ending coming! Very, very enjoyable read! Thank you for your work!
3/18/21, 8:32 PM
Now THAT'S an ENDING! Hot!!!