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3/19/21, 7:52 PM
pure hot mean fun. this is great and the mental breakdown of Eli i really well dine.
3/19/21, 7:01 PM
@Trick: I made the comment before the edit warning the chapter was cut
3/19/21, 6:55 PM
The desire to wear clothes was taken, I think. Maybe? I’m already loving this. I especially like the first bit where it explains who is doing this but not why. It immediately makes me think someone used the technology already on the people in the underground bunker. “It was strange, and he wasn’t sure why he was doing it, but it was his job for the day and good workers did as they were told.” That’s an awesome little bit, if I’m right. The workers think they know what’s up and are protected from the effects of the changes, meanwhile they’ve already been changed to do whatever they’re told. Super hot setup!
3/19/21, 5:50 PM
one of the best stories and ideas I've read on this site in a long time!
3/19/21, 5:34 PM
White-hot. One of the best, sexiest displays of moral decay I've ever read.
3/19/21, 5:29 PM
I don't get it what was taken and what was given this time?
3/19/21, 5:08 PM
damn this is hot
3/19/21, 4:13 PM
Awesome premise! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Well done!
3/19/21, 2:02 PM
Nice story! I think it'd be cool to see more about how the water seemed to have Parker talking like a little boy for a moment. I'm really excited!
3/19/21, 1:00 PM
Oh man, I wanted to make a story where the hypnotist is a side character singe a while, but I couldn't find a satisfying plot. Great start to!