Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/25/21, 2:10 AM
how about erase the memory of father and son
rwriter51
4/25/21, 1:03 AM
It's been such a long time. I hope you're able to continue soon.
4/24/21, 10:53 PM
I didn't come to this but it was a good original to me story!
4/24/21, 10:45 PM
Seriously good writing.
4/24/21, 8:07 PM
Awesome! Glad that we're apparently not going to have to wait months between chapters, very exciting :)
4/24/21, 7:59 PM
I hope that there is more soon
firesix
4/23/21, 9:42 PM
Good work and great idea, though I definitely think it could use more attention to grammar and spelling. I also wondered why infected men would be called "berries" and "cherries"?

4/24/21, 5:50 PM
Thank you for the critique, revisions for grammatical errors will be made :). I'm glad you enjoyed my story thus far. More clarity on why infected men are called berries and "cherries" next installment! @firesix
4/24/21, 4:47 PM
Damn! So fucking hot. Please continue!
4/24/21, 4:13 PM
very very hot love it
Anonymous
4/24/21, 2:42 PM
Good start!