Hey everybody - sorry to take so long to respond here. I figured you probably wanted the last chapter before you wanted my replies. @anon - THANK YOU! I love writing these :) [@Thom](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/908711) - Hey, it sounds like a rough first year. I wish you didn't have to do this with COVID as a concern. In a lot of ways, I think next year is going to be a different because two years worth of students are going to need their frosh experiences. You'll grow and change a lot through college, and I want you to know that's okay. I had a hard time my first year, but the next year I met a group of wonderful people and really started to have some fun. There are some resources your college might have that you should check out: counselling really helped me just because it was someone I could talk to for an hour every week, my campus pride club helped me feel like maybe I wasn't the only one learning about my sexuality, and if you live on campus RA's can be great people to talk to whether you're having trouble or not. Take care friend, you're not alone and there's nothing wrong with having trouble finding your place. [@Anonymous Fox](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/308354) - You can't build tension without building conflicts, and release is so much more fun with tension ;) I'm thrilled you said 'Midas Touch', that's exactly what I was thinking of when I decided to expand this to a full series. [@darkblade2814](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/243317) - I really like Sam in this chapter too. He seems like exactly the guy who should be the leader of a campus pride group. [@Mrdick](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001656) - Is it Dale? I bet it's Dale. @anon2 - Thank you sir :) [@the brain exotic](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/92123) - Depending how this goes, she may have to settle for a musclebound jock wearing glasses. [@Proteus](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/961566) - I think you'll probably get your wish. I don't know that I've ever written a *completely* happy ending. I guess the question is, happy for who? [@BlindSeer0](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/381024) - I think I'd like you a hell of a lot if we met in real life. You're empathetic, understanding, and forgiving. I love that. And yeah, I miss my multi-coloured liberty spikes too. Though I never did rainbow... [@MonsterMash62](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/3332) - If I were making a movie out of this, I think I'd tell Riley's actor to sound like he's trying to be convincing but he can't quite cover up his real feelings. Riley's got a major thing for Marc, I don't know that his support here it totally genuine. Or maybe he's just that selfless of a guy. [@Cris Kane](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/38728) - All wonderful questions that I can't answer without spoilers. As for the dorm, I'm picturing the school I went to as I write this, but I had to change the dorm names to preserve *some* anonymity. [@Catalust](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/920370) - It's a good question, I doubt Marc even knows. As they say, power corrupts. [@HunkLover](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/914611) - Thanks! I'm glad this chapter showed off some of Marc's humanity. I think we'll see more of that play out over the next couple chapters. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Hey, I had a thing for rugby bros LONG before I read Absman's story. I don't know DanTai, looking forward to giving him a read. [@absman420](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/162063) - Sometimes you gotta steal a plot straight from King Midas. @anon3 - I'll be curious what you think of the ending. I've just submitted the last chapter, so hopefully you'll be reading it soon! [@mysterium](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1416679) - Unfortunately, we're in the endgame now. Chapter Nine will be the last in this series, but I've been described as one of our most prolific writers, so I'm sure I'll be posting something else soonish. [@Viridian](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/16446) - Thank you! Your comments mean a lot to me, I love your stories. To be fair, I should mention there are a lot of authors commenting here whose work I love. I'm kind of a slut like that. I feel like you and I get Riley in the same way. He might actually be the most 'real' character I've ever written, and that's because he's written most of it himself. Riley's one of those characters that climbs off the page. [@PTutius27](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/979133) - In fairness, I use cornstarch.

Not reinventing the wheel or anything, but a solid, sexy story. Good work!

oooooo i like

Sam could be immune to Marcs ring because he has his own ring

WOWOWOW! i am not normally into superhero stories, but i have to say that this is one of the hottest erotic stories i've ever read! Like Superman trapped by his adversary and then finally making his escape, i would normally read part of a superhero story and then quietly make my escape. Not so at all with this one. i kept reading in part because it was totally a mental mind trap reading about Superman's arousing agonizing loss of control. i could vividly feel his pounding, the impossibly erotically pleasurable pounding, the slow loss of strength and energy and finally will power. Then Parasite would leave and Superman would begin to recover, break his chains, and i would be quite sure once again that he would make his escape and devise a plan to victory. Again no! each time more easily taken and controlled, his body slowly shrinking and his mind closer to surrender before fighting back once again more weakly than before. When i doubted the hero had the capability to win the day, i found comfort in the idea that the Parasite would not drain him dry and lose his opportunity to rebuild and re-energize. i thought if it came down to it, Superman could negotiate on this point. True, Superman would likely be irrevocably enslaved to Parasite, but at least alive. In fact at this point in the story, i personally surrendered to Parasite's superiority. When this opportunity was quickly crushed by the news that the changes became permanent when the victim was fully drained, all hope was dashed. The victim had nothing with which to negotiate. Like one of the other readers, i am not into 'snuff' scenarios. Still, this was after all a superhero fantasy, and Parasite did truly win the game. So while i would have preferred some sort of total enslavement scenario at the end, if the superhero had to go, it was a good way to die! As the author, you are the Master of the story. You truly mastered this story, so i surrender! What a way to go!! Thanks so much! P.S. i still lament the loss of Landon and the other jocks, particularly since they apparently only got to reach that amazing sexual crescendo once before drying out like prunes. Still they did experience it once.

What a fantastically fun story! You capture the voices perfectly, and the imagery is, dare I say, delicious. ;p And @Nutiper--in thinking about it, the leprechaun said "a hundred SCORE." Does that mean that our hero has to suckle a hundred cocks, or TWO THOUSAND? :O

Oh damn but I *do* love a good blowjob scene... With a handsome muscled milkman, to boot... Plus this whole damn concept — "one blowjob down, lad, now ninety-nine left to go!" — all set in 1950s Ireland, and with the narrative voice to match —this is so *fun*. Fecking hell!!

You pack a lot of action into a relatively short number of words. I'm impressed. I wish I could do that with my writing. I have to admit that I'm a bit bummed that this is the penultimate chapter. I'd love to read more in this universe. But that also got me to thinking if this story's universe might be connected to some of your other stories. I can see some connections that could be made. Regardless, I'm looking forward to the end of this story and hopefully soon, more stories from you.

more please

The plot thickens!