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3/17/21, 8:09 AM
I must admit that check GSS mostly for your stories and yesterday I was so excited to see your icon on the front page again!!! You said that you are not so motivated rn and that you need some responses for that. So here is my contribution and pls go on with that!!! The beginning was really my taste and I enjoy every story of you. So please go on writing, I really hope not to wait months for the next installments, because your writings are my motivations to go on every day!
3/17/21, 7:47 AM
part 3!!
3/17/21, 7:44 AM
What if Sam is the mysterious ass-cupper that grows men? :O
3/17/21, 6:56 AM
Well this has all the makings of a great story, can't wait to see where it goes. 😍
3/17/21, 5:49 AM
I'm a sucker for happy endings, but I trust it will be good anyway. Derek, this is a wonderful series. I loved the way the narrator's tone became gradually colder, making him seem either corrupted by power or very much a victim himself. I've liked Riley and the way he seems both supportive and conflicted, occasionally a partner in crime, sometimes a conscience, sometimes just a guy in need or with a crush on Marc. He's got the lust, but he seems to be fighting it a bit. (So much so I've been wondering if he's planning an intervention or a rebellion of some kind.) I agree with Absman and Cris: Nothing worse for a Lust Ring than falling in love and Marc is redeemable.
BearBoi
3/17/21, 5:10 AM
yeah, i guess i'm just oversensitive to that because of the amount of times i've seen that attitude voiced entirely sincerely. sorry for jumping in on that. but yeah-- what's even the point of the hypnosis/transformation if it doesn't strongly contrast the original position? i agree with you there. haha
Anonymous
3/17/21, 4:29 AM
looking forward to wherever this is going!
Anonymous
3/17/21, 4:14 AM
very hot and very well done
3/17/21, 3:50 AM
Prolong the tension, make things complicated. I hope there really is another ring or two floating around, or maybe someone will get up to some mischief with Marc's ring when he takes it off.
3/17/21, 3:46 AM
This is a very well written piece, bravo! :D