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Apr 15, 2012
Anonymous
3/17/21, 2:49 PM
This is so HOT
3/17/21, 2:25 PM
I think that since Marc got the ring off amazon, other people could have gotten other rings from Amazon as well. I wonder what would happen if 2 ring users met each other and kept changing each other in a endless loop of lust and sex?
Anonymous
3/17/21, 1:46 PM
I like where this is going! Don't keep us waiting for long!
3/17/21, 1:29 PM
As far as we know, the ring has never been used on a natural gay man. It could have different rules or be less effective? Whatever the case, I'm pulling for a lighter ending that seems to be more in line with the mostly lighter tone of the series. But as MrDick said, you're the author Derek. Just keep going you writing machine.
BONER 4 BOTTOM SUPERHEROES
3/17/21, 11:36 AM
I think that steamy fun and heated bliss were the final results I'd give each chapter of your vividly imagined story. 5 Huge Boner rating ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 Giant Loads of Cum rating ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 Big Butt Plug rating ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 I Want MORE rating ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I absolutely loved imaging Cabal getting gang fucked day in, day out (like the cocks up his ass and down his throat ... in & out... in & out... in & out... ... ... 👅) by those biker dudes and gang members. Tasty bitch!
3/17/21, 11:33 AM
A good start. Keep on, please.
3/17/21, 10:58 AM
this is fun. i agree that Sam is the culprit. but i think the power balance is hot. i for one don't care for a mushy ending. i come here for jerking material let either one end up the victim of the others desires. or do whatever you had in store. you are the author so whatever you choose is absolutely right.
Anonymous
3/17/21, 9:42 AM
Why is this so fucking hot? I love the transformation. Wished you'd have had the 'just tidy and neat' come back, perhaps have the guy think that the new haircut is just that and nothing extreme. Or perhaps another new employee of the bar will get multiple cuts just to get it 'tidy and neat' while his definition of whats tidy and neat gets shorter and shorter each time until he is turned into another chav lad?
3/17/21, 9:42 AM
Honestly, in a way I'm hoping that Sam is...not a good guy. Because I personally want Marc to end up with Riley. I'm also hoping that since Marc seems to be realizing he's been quite an asshole to a lot of the guys he's changed, that some of them may get at least some of their old selves back, especially the ones that had been smart that he made stupid. And I hope that he learns that his actions have had consequences, especially if any of those consequences have ended up being bad, like someone being disowned or even assaulted because of their new gayness. It'd be a refreshing change of pace to see a character like him end up feeling guilt for what they've caused.
3/17/21, 9:25 AM
As usual an amazing chapter, looks like this is proper revenge, but seems like Erik hits our protagonist’s nerves the hardest, I wonder if Eli’s punishment will be more relaxed than Erik’s