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3/17/21, 7:47 AM
part 3!!
3/17/21, 7:44 AM
What if Sam is the mysterious ass-cupper that grows men? :O
3/17/21, 6:56 AM
Well this has all the makings of a great story, can't wait to see where it goes. 😍
3/17/21, 5:49 AM
I'm a sucker for happy endings, but I trust it will be good anyway. Derek, this is a wonderful series. I loved the way the narrator's tone became gradually colder, making him seem either corrupted by power or very much a victim himself. I've liked Riley and the way he seems both supportive and conflicted, occasionally a partner in crime, sometimes a conscience, sometimes just a guy in need or with a crush on Marc. He's got the lust, but he seems to be fighting it a bit. (So much so I've been wondering if he's planning an intervention or a rebellion of some kind.) I agree with Absman and Cris: Nothing worse for a Lust Ring than falling in love and Marc is redeemable.
BearBoi
3/17/21, 5:10 AM
yeah, i guess i'm just oversensitive to that because of the amount of times i've seen that attitude voiced entirely sincerely. sorry for jumping in on that. but yeah-- what's even the point of the hypnosis/transformation if it doesn't strongly contrast the original position? i agree with you there. haha
Anonymous
3/17/21, 4:29 AM
looking forward to wherever this is going!
Anonymous
3/17/21, 4:14 AM
very hot and very well done
3/17/21, 3:50 AM
Prolong the tension, make things complicated. I hope there really is another ring or two floating around, or maybe someone will get up to some mischief with Marc's ring when he takes it off.
3/17/21, 3:46 AM
This is a very well written piece, bravo! :D
Anonymous
3/17/21, 3:38 AM
I like path 1 but I'm a little curious how you would end 2