Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/17/21, 3:30 AM
i really think marc should get a happy ending... also the romance part is really hot. I am secretly hoping that Sam is the guy that has the other ring...
Anonymous
3/17/21, 3:01 AM
Oof, so far this story ticks all the right boxes for me! Looking forward to reading the rest, another Hypnothrill classic! I thought adding in the inspiration image was a nice touch.
3/17/21, 2:46 AM
Great start! Really liked it.
3/17/21, 2:36 AM
Hot! i need a daddy like that :O
3/17/21, 2:35 AM
glad you have written another story. def one of the best writers on here
3/17/21, 2:27 AM
Very nice!
3/17/21, 2:19 AM
I've been waiting for a story like this for ages! If you didn't plan it from the start I'd like to nominate Sam and Mac for enslavement as well
3/17/21, 1:39 AM
A simple story and yet true to the premise of the contest. Very nice piece; it has my vote for the competition
3/17/21, 1:31 AM
Amazing as usual! Seeing new stories from you brightens my day! Excited to see what follows!
3/17/21, 1:30 AM
Great beginning, Hypnothrill! I look forward to more of this story.