Nice start. More, please!

Hypnothrill's at it again! I realize that your stories are like journeys--we know the inevitable destination, but the route you take us along is so beautiful (and so hypnotic and hot!) that we love the ride. I also think it's very interesting to have a protagonist who is ALREADY in excellent shape. So many of these stories are about guys transforming into ideal Adonises, so seeing one who's already there makes for a refreshing twist. Now, bring on the mindlessness! The alien parasites! The mutagens! It's a Hypnothrill story! :D

So far it's great! Though I admit I was taken aback by the sudden picture. It may just be my tastes, but I really do'nt like those. It feels like they break the flow of the story

This story keeps getting better. I don't know if Marc can have a happy ending while wearing the ring. If the ring can come off would a happy ending be forced on Marc without his choice. He would love it. I see Riley evolving some mainly so he can get some dick. Coming to terms with his situation so he can fulfill his needs. Absman and DanTai made us love muscled up RugbyBoys. It didn't take much but causes a long lasting semi. I have a feeling Sam has either had his ass slapped or slapped a few himself. No mention of a ring on his hand but here's hoping he wears is somewhere else. What happens when two people both wearing rings fuck? Will there be a ripple that goes across the globe effecting mankind? Are men lined up to be fucked by Marc or have their ass slapped first if they don't meet Marc's requirements.

[@MonsterMash62](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/3332) - Man, I hope you're going to enjoy the reveal. Regarding Marc being uninteresting, it's sort of on purpose. Marc's that guy from your college dorm who never really made friends, wasn't sure why he went to college in the first place, and never asked anyone for help. A lot like my experience in my first semester. I dropped out, figured out who I was, and ended up going to college again a couple years later in a much better place. Instead of doing the work tho, Marc turned to a magical solution, and I think we all know that has it's costs. As for Marc's morals, I was kind of a fuckboy in college, and I think Marc reflects that part of me. (What's that you say? All my stories are just me unpacking? Duh.) [@HighinTrance](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/951234) - I'm responding late, so you might have read it already, but go check out Teddy in Chapter 7. He's a twink trapped in a quarterbacks body, and I don't think he minds ;) [@Kametzer](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10005392) - I don't know if I could write that well... maybe something to try another time. [@Freckleman64](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10004736) - Marc's assholic behaviour around sex is sort of reflective of me in college. He's an amped up version, but looking back I was such an asshole fuckboy. [@Jockmorphr](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10000115) - Yeah, Caleb's hot. If I could be one character so far, it'd be him. There's definitely something brewing on campus. [@DuskSkullKing](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001913) - Man, I wasn't really planning on revisiting that, but I'm gonna put a scene in chapter 8 just for you. [@thexshxboi](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/910223) - Thanks man! There's a scene near the end I think you're gonna love. [@Horn](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1014477) - Sometimes I wish I had the patience and the pacing other authors have (Hi Absman), but yeah, I pretty much write these each in one go and post 'em. Glad you're enjoying! [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Is Marc hot? Maybe he's kinda cute, but I agree with you, these guys are all seeing him through a horny fog that makes him look hotter than he really is. I can guarantee that whatever's transforming guys physically, it's not a magic stone. I love MonsterMash62's stories tho, he's heavily influenced my writing, so let's say it's in honour of him anywho. Keep strokin' ;) [@Ruffcub](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/21211) - Would it really be a Derek Williams story if everything went to plan? [@Tornado](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/973883) - Fun idea! It doesn't fit with the resolution we're headed towards, but it's a great side fantasy ;) [@absman420](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/162063) - Fuck, I thought I was *supposed* to tell everyone. Sorry, I've been so silly and stupid since Marc fucked me... [@Proteus](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/961566) - Power bottom Caleb is definitely one of my favourites. I didn't really mean to write him that way, he just jumped off the page and started riding cowboy, so I had to put it in. And so far as room 227 goes, that was my dorm room number in my senior year. @anon - Wait... these mysteries are supposed to be unraveled at some point? Sorry, I've been learning the JJ Abrams style of storytelling where nothing is ever resolved. ;) @anon2 - Thanks man! Getting a thousand guys hard every night is my favourite part of writing ;) [@PTutius](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/979133) - Aw, you're the best!

hey, I don't know what you are plaining, but what about making the dad a power bottom? also it's a good start, I like a good slow burn every once in a while, good luck on this project

incredibly well written. I love how deep into his obsession you pull us!

interesting start. can't wait to read more

Also, as someone who had rainbow hair and wants it back, I'm loving Riley's new look.

Another great chapter - more fantastic conflict and obstacles for our characters. Marc's not exactly been my favourite character in the past - coming off as a little cold and dismissive, but the shred of vulnerability turned my perspective on him. Well done creating a fantastic story so far!