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3/16/21, 5:46 PM
incredibly well written. I love how deep into his obsession you pull us!
3/16/21, 5:21 PM
interesting start. can't wait to read more
3/16/21, 4:21 PM
Also, as someone who had rainbow hair and wants it back, I'm loving Riley's new look.
3/16/21, 3:51 PM
Another great chapter - more fantastic conflict and obstacles for our characters. Marc's not exactly been my favourite character in the past - coming off as a little cold and dismissive, but the shred of vulnerability turned my perspective on him. Well done creating a fantastic story so far!
CLB
3/16/21, 2:56 PM
Very good start! Look forward to more
3/16/21, 2:47 PM
I can't tell if Marc's callousness comes from within, from the ring, or from a bit of both...and that'd affect the kind of ending I'd want for him. In any case, I'd like to see him come to grips with what he's done and try to make amends. Keep up the good work :)
3/16/21, 2:45 PM
Marc may have gotten carried away in his lust for power (or is it power for lust), but his chat with Sam shows he's redeemable. Might HE have been the one changed if Sam had touched him? But does Marc dare remove the ring, and what effect will that have on him and those he's transformed? Not to mention, what happens if someone else tries it on? Nice how they renamed the dorm in your honor.
3/16/21, 2:37 PM
I agree with Blindseer0, also if it's okay, why not a threesome: Marc, Sam and Riley after he learns his lesion and atone for his nastier actions
3/16/21, 2:27 PM
What was up with Riley? He’s fine being a wing man now, and being supportive to Marc being interested in someone else? I can see him being fine as long as Marc will fuck him again, but didn’t Riley say I love you last chapter? Seems a little bit of a change for him now. I suspect Riley’s involved in something and/or knows something we don’t. (I’m also still loving this story of course. I pledge the site on Sponsus so get emails every time the story is updated, and tend to read new chapters within 20 minutes of them being posted)
3/16/21, 1:46 PM
oh dude, this is A++ excellent! i really hope to see you continue this, haha 💖