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CLB
3/16/21, 2:56 PM
Very good start! Look forward to more
3/16/21, 2:47 PM
I can't tell if Marc's callousness comes from within, from the ring, or from a bit of both...and that'd affect the kind of ending I'd want for him. In any case, I'd like to see him come to grips with what he's done and try to make amends. Keep up the good work :)
3/16/21, 2:45 PM
Marc may have gotten carried away in his lust for power (or is it power for lust), but his chat with Sam shows he's redeemable. Might HE have been the one changed if Sam had touched him? But does Marc dare remove the ring, and what effect will that have on him and those he's transformed? Not to mention, what happens if someone else tries it on? Nice how they renamed the dorm in your honor.
3/16/21, 2:37 PM
I agree with Blindseer0, also if it's okay, why not a threesome: Marc, Sam and Riley after he learns his lesion and atone for his nastier actions
3/16/21, 2:27 PM
What was up with Riley? He’s fine being a wing man now, and being supportive to Marc being interested in someone else? I can see him being fine as long as Marc will fuck him again, but didn’t Riley say I love you last chapter? Seems a little bit of a change for him now. I suspect Riley’s involved in something and/or knows something we don’t. (I’m also still loving this story of course. I pledge the site on Sponsus so get emails every time the story is updated, and tend to read new chapters within 20 minutes of them being posted)
3/16/21, 1:46 PM
oh dude, this is A++ excellent! i really hope to see you continue this, haha 💖
3/16/21, 1:30 PM
Of course he deserves a happy ending. He's a lonely 18/19 year old that's in a new place and trying to fit in. A lot of people do dumb or selfish things, they just don't have a magic ring. Yeah, his actions have effected a lot of other people, some of them pretty negatively and he should definitely face consequences for that, but if he learns from this and becomes a better person i see no reason he shouldn't get his own happy ending.
3/16/21, 1:06 PM
I like that Marc is developing a conscience and becoming curious about what the other effects of the ring are. However, I'm not sure if I want him to have a happy ending. I guess it would depend on how many more chapters this story will have. If it's wrapping up very soon, I don't think a completely happy ending would feel right. In any case, I'm quite liking the new conflicts with each chapter, and that I don't really know where the story is going. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.
3/16/21, 11:21 AM
This story has me checking the site more often than usual. Gotta get that next chapter, y'know! And you keep delivering! As for a happy ending for Marc... I'm on the fence. I feel like he needs a taste of his own medicine, but I wouldnt mind if that ended up a good thing for him. Someone has to put a stop to some of the jockfication (boo, I know) going around campus, if nothing else so that there are still some nerds around for Riley's ex-gf to fawn over, that poor thing. ;)
Anonymous
3/16/21, 9:44 AM
spectacular work!