Recent Comments

Art
3/16/21, 8:30 AM
Looking forward to seeing more! Would also love to get a prequel one day to find out how these two got started.
3/16/21, 8:13 AM
Love how you keep introducing conflict, each chapter has at least one point of tension, this recent "Midas touch" angle being especially interesting to me. So many long running stories on this site end up just becoming whistle stop tours of all the main character's conquests with no conflict or plot at all, and while those can still be hot, it means the writer often loses interest in their own story.
Thom
3/16/21, 7:53 AM
Marc's conversation with Sam really hit me on a personal level. I've been feeling extremely lonely since I've started college, partially because of Covid. There's also a fear of commitment mixed in. It's really nice to see it somewhat represented in a story like this. Good story as always, Derek
Anonymous
3/16/21, 7:42 AM
I LOVE THIIIIIISSSSSSS!!!!!!!!
3/16/21, 5:15 AM
I also have to ask if you chose room 227 for a reason. It's probably random, but I'm curious. :)
3/16/21, 4:48 AM
I love every chapter of this and am always delighted when I see another new chapter posted!
Anonymous
3/16/21, 4:15 AM
i fucking love this story it just makes me so hard
Carus
3/16/21, 3:39 AM
Prediction: He ends up being converted into actually being a major by the nanobots.
3/16/21, 3:13 AM
loved this! glad to see you're taking it in new directions and can't wait to read more!
SKitch-After-Dark
3/16/21, 3:12 AM
love this so much! please Keep up the good work & besides writing in English is great practice!