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3/15/21, 10:32 PM
Loved every word of it.. personal preference obviously, but I wouldn't have changed a thing. Very hot!
3/15/21, 10:32 PM
Like MonsterMash, I'm curious if the timing of Caleb's transformation happened when Marc fucked Riley a second time. I could see the power of the ring having a sort of ripple effect. Of course, this now means I want to see what happens if he fucks Riley again. A bigger ripple effect? The sex scene between Caleb and Marc was super hot. I love that Caleb became a power bottom. I'm most definitely intrigued to see what happens when Marc hits the gym. Can't wait for the next installment.
nyan
3/15/21, 10:02 PM
I want to see Tim and his other two friends before the dad! Maybe their twins and spit roast him?
3/15/21, 9:58 PM
Maybe there's a One Ring that rules over them all...? I told you not to tell anybody that I had that muscle ring.
3/15/21, 9:56 PM
Sure, I just sent a message to you via the GSS forums.
3/15/21, 9:50 PM
Great story -- I want that app
3/15/21, 9:45 PM
Just a thought on an incredible hot hot story.... Caleb maybe learns the power of the ring. His red jockstrap can be used to manipulate the power of the ring. But alas, he must take energy away from Riley and Marc. He inadvertantly forces Marc to experience a flat out denial of someone's ass. He can't seem to press the right buttons... or tap on the shoulders ... or flick the finger. Marc desperately wants this new athlete swim captain in his hot speedos. Marc is then forced to watch this athlete walk over to Caleb for beggers sex. Caleb peels the tight navy blue university colors off one of the finest asses. Its a slight angle.
3/15/21, 8:38 PM
@OP for me it really was just like the last paragraph that pushed it over the edge. I enjoyed Parasite having Supes chained up and fucking him nonstop, I enjoyed Supes getting steadily more turned on by the sessions, I enjoyed Parasite growing and stealing his muscles, I enjoyed him shrinking into a superslut twunk. I still got a good fap out of it ;) It was when Parasite said "destroy" that I thought "oh I hope not literally." Similar to Stroppy Author's comment about contentment in a way, I love when a transformation victim embraces their new role/gives into the debauchery and humiliation, a more psychological destruction if that makes sense? The experience of being fucked nonstop and drained becoming too erotic and addictive that it breaks him mentally and he stops being Superman and is just a cock-crazy slut with a fetish for villains (I was intrigued by the dream he had about getting used by Luthor!) I suppose it's philosophically debatable whether that's fundamentally any different than death, but for me in a transformation story it at least feels different. At the end of the day, it's your story to write to your own satisfaction, and I can't say it wasn't a logical conclusion to the scenario, given that Parasite was the villain you were working with. Regardless, I really did enjoy your writing and I look forward to finding out who you are!
Anonymous
3/15/21, 7:42 PM
To follow up with my comment above, I should say most of the people writing comments here are being very kind and respectful! Always nice to see that, along with an author being so considerate with their responses to feedback.
Anonymous
3/15/21, 7:36 PM
I'll never understand why people feel compelled to tell an author their story was too mean spirited or didn't have the happy ending they would have preferred. Personally, I'm a big fan of dark endings and it gets me off. Are all stories supposed to end with the characters falling in love and living happily ever after? I understand that some stories might cross the line, especially when dealing with matters of consent or things that feel perhaps a bit too realistic for comfort, but this is a fantasy story about fictional characters, both of which possess abilities that no real person has. Quite frankly, it could have been far darker than this. Ever since I was a kid watching Spider-Man 3, I've been a fan of superhero downfall fantasies. Do I enjoy a more romantic story once and a while? Sure! But not every story needs to end that way, and it's okay to have stories out there that don't appeal to you. Put another way, nobody choosing to write up their own fantasies and share it with the world for free owes you anything. To the author, thanks for writing! It was a nice way to start my Monday and definitely had me straining in my cage. I hope you continue.