Cant wait to hear more of his time in the bar

@Chetboner7 Great work 10/10. The site is a bit confusing to new users, like me, it looks to me like the above is just chapter 1 because I can't see and indicator of where your "chapters" begin/end. I thought there may be 4 other chapters still to come but I am not sure.

yes! continue! this will be hot if you make him as hus slave!

love as always

Another great work from you! wish I could afford to buy the book, but alas. Itll be on the to buy for sure!

****The author; name withheld to comply with the writing challenge's rules** Many thanks for everybody’s comments; regardless of whether you liked (all of) the story, the fact you took the time out to share your thoughts does mean a lot to me. ********* @Maxigay Muchas gracias; usted está mucho generoso! ********* @Commenter No.2 To be honest, you’re probably right that the story is rather mean-spirited. After all, it is one about how Superman is drained, dominated and fucked into oblivion. Would changing the ending have redeemed it, or is the entire premise already too much? ********* @Curiosity Dang it! (Insert laugh-cry emoji) I really hope the ending didn't ruin the rest of the story for you. I know oh so well how disappointing it could be when a story ends on an off note and ruins what would've been an excellent wank (and I'm not above suggesting that this story is, at the end of the day, really just wanking material). How would you preferred to have the story end, or perhaps from which part did it start getting much for you? In any event, thank you so much for praising my writing. Before I pressed the ‘Publish’ button, that was the part which worried me the most! ********* @absman420 Very glad you enjoyed the story. I look forward to reading your take on the Superman-Parasite dynamic as well! You've said the ending is *super* dark, but was it *too* dark for your taste? ********* @Stroppy Author Many thanks for your thought-provoking comment! To be frank, I have some reservations about the idea all parties concerned ought to find closure or ‘find contentment’ in their role; it seems a little too neat. I just didn’t really consider either of the main characters to acquiesce or give way. I was particularly hesitant to use deux ex machina to get Superman out of the bind he was in, and because there really wasn’t a way out for him, the story ended the way it did. It’s probably just a ‘me’ thing, since I enjoy the unpredictability of The Game of Thrones books. If it makes you feel any better (and I'm not saying this just because of your comment), I actually planned this out as a series, with this story being the first of four parts. Part 2 may not be out until the next century, but I do have a reasonably clear roadmap as to how the story would continue. Would you have enjoyed the story more if the ending was more of an ellipsis rather than a full stop? ********* @Larry Thanks so much! When you said ‘Parasite draining Superman was part of your gay awakening’, did you mean the scenes in *Superman: The Animated Series*? I found out about the show through Tumblr a few months before the site’s porn ban, and they definitely awoke something in me as well! Do let me know if there’s something specific you wanna read/see me write about! (P.S. Is it ‘The Parasite’ or just ‘Parasite’? Cause I may have fucked this up) ********* @moolah How very kind of you! Hope you had a fun (wink wink) time reading it :P ********* @julius Thank you very much! Glad you liked it! ********* @Redcoma100 Thanks for your comment! To be honest, I didn’t expect the ending to be that controversial! To me, the ending was how things would have progressed naturally, especially since I don’t think Parasite would have been that merciful (nor had that much self-control). But I definitely agree it would have been hot for Superman to have been reduced to a superslut! Would you mind letting me know when did I start to lose you in terms of how the story ended?

overall a great story and I would love to see where it may go next. The only error I saw was saying Army . The Marine Corps is its own branch of the military. They are not part of the Army.

Really hot story! The changes were awesome.

Great story !!

This just keeps getting better and better! I'm particularly enjoying the way things aren't quite panning out how Marc expected and the additional, mysterious side events are really adding to the excitement. It'll be fun to see what happens next as I get a sense Marc's not going to come out of this adventure unscathed!