Recent Comments

3/15/21, 6:31 PM
I appreciate your individual addresses. That speaks volumes of you as a Person! That your story created such a discourse also speaks volumes about your writing. For me, a story is a catharsis or an escape and I like the possibility of reform, completion, resurrection or epiphany. Even the ones where someone is trapped in their new state and conscious of their dilemma. For me, I think I would have liked to hear that a hero wasn't wasted. Maybe merged with, in an unpredictable way, or, as was suggested, becomes a super slut, or conquers the Parasite but becomes, himself, a parasite by need, not evil intent. But it's your story; your catharsis or statement. Even if I didnt like the ending, I have to acknowledge it's validity. And it is a valid, well worked story.
3/15/21, 6:25 PM
This story hits too close to home; it's straight from my fantasies. Love that someone finally wrote a sneaker/shoe fetish story and got it all right! AMAZING! And the details were perfect: I've looked up and fallen for so many new shoes especially the ones that caused the transformation. Also: becoming the guy who owned the used, thrift store shoes? The stuff of dreams.
3/15/21, 6:18 PM
I liked the Daddy kink, and the cooing and rocking helped lean into that. Amazing writing, especially for a first time!
Anonymous
3/15/21, 6:12 PM
Really awesome story! Pretty sure Ive read this on Metabods before. Are you the same author?
Conversion Enthusiast
3/15/21, 6:11 PM
Welcome back! I'm glad the pharaoh reestablished his presence! Looking forward to the next parts
3/15/21, 5:55 PM
Don't worry about your English skills, your writing is great! This story is the right length and I can't wait to see what happens next.
3/15/21, 5:44 PM
I did love the Superman animated series. I loved watching Superman getting taken down by the parasite or Metallo. I read earlier in your comment that you were planning on a series, and I hope that you continue! My main fantasies revolve around the entire Justice League getting hunted down and the Parasite using the powers he got from the last hero to take down the next. I looked at Wikipedia regarding the syntax, and I think both are correct. If the sentence starts with Parasite, it's just "Parasite" but it's "the Parasite" within a sentence.
3/15/21, 4:51 PM
Cant wait to hear more of his time in the bar
3/15/21, 4:33 PM
@Chetboner7 Great work 10/10. The site is a bit confusing to new users, like me, it looks to me like the above is just chapter 1 because I can't see and indicator of where your "chapters" begin/end. I thought there may be 4 other chapters still to come but I am not sure.
3/15/21, 3:20 PM
yes! continue! this will be hot if you make him as hus slave!