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boi98229
3/15/21, 3:07 AM
i know this is fantasy, but it still bothers me a little that the arrangement is non-consensual with drone-level control. The other thing that bothers me a little is that to my knowledge and experience no hypnosis gives that much control so quickly. i tend to be more forgiving when the category is "powers and magic". i prefer my hypnosis stories to feel more authentic. (i know: this is fantasy, and i need to get over it!! ...okay, i'm over it!!) That all said this story is so hot to a large extent because it is non-consensual and the control and power are so strong. i thought it was particularly arousing that Matthew and Cameron both deliberately re-used the control app on their phones when they felt uneasy about their programming becoming less effective -- very insidious and very hot! Thank you so much for sharing your great story-telling and imagination! Looking forward to more! i would happily and nervously consent to such an arrangement for real on a part-time or short-term basis just for the experience, perhaps even longer for the right Master with certain defined limits/conditions.
3/15/21, 2:49 AM
greatt!
3/15/21, 2:23 AM
are we getting the next chapter soon?
3/15/21, 12:20 AM
Good stuff right here! Bravo!
3/15/21, 12:19 AM
I loved this story. The Parasite draining Superman was part of my gay awakening and I've always had a thing for reading/watching superheroes get drained. This did not disappoint in that area. I hope to see more from you in the future!
3/15/21, 12:01 AM
I do love the twists and thoughtful conflicts. Good works!
Mar 13, 2021
3/14/21, 11:58 PM
Amazing. So curious about the teases of other triggers planted in his mind waiting to be used.
3/14/21, 11:53 PM
As far as writing style goes, it was well done and the proper length. But the ending... I would agree, it was not to my taste. One of the recurring themes in the MC stories is that people find a way to fulfill a role for each victim or character. Everyone becomes connected or finds contentment in their new life but this ends all possibilities. Evil wins. Hope is lost. end of story. If there were a part two where Superman is reborn in the conscience of the Parasite or somehow Parasite is replaced by the unseen power of goodness or hope, I would give this a plus rating.
3/14/21, 11:43 PM
I feel really bad for Dale here. Sure, hid advice was of questionable value, but "one of your patients bought a magical mind control ring of horniness off the internet" isn't really something they train you for. especially when he's right that maybe Marc needs to reign it back a bit. And poor Teddy. His life about to be ruined because Marc wanted to prove a point, and not even a particularly good point. He didn't just make Dale super horny to test his self-control, Dale has already been mind fucked into a horny gay slut and had his intelligence drained so he can't do his job. Its not proving a point, its being a prick. The story really reminds me a lot of "Faucets" by Screaming Moist or "Stone of Nanya", so it will be interesting to see where it goes. Keep up the good work.
3/14/21, 11:10 PM
I really like the world and I think your story is great. Many topics that interest me. I would like to know what types of drones there are, which ones are canon in your story? We know that there are T, B and Cyborg (was it C?) Drones. I also saw pictures of mermaid drones. Are there more and what characterizes them (appearance / function / fetish)?