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2/6/25, 9:51 PM
I know the Story’s complete…. If it were continued, it’d be cool if Danny was a Jordie “clone,” both of whom would be plowing an increasingly curvy “Mom?”
2/6/25, 9:06 PM
Thought back about this series recently. Was really good to re-read even years later.:green_heart:
2/6/25, 1:04 PM
Wow, this chapter was amazing. I loved the fight between the heroes controlled by Leviathan and the main group. Chase was an interesting and more than welcome addition to Colt's group. And Iron Claw's death really hit me. At least now he's free from Leviathan's manipulation. And this development in Leviathan's lore. I don't wish on anyone to be tortured and raped for weeks. That doesn't excuse all the bad things and crimes he committed, but at least now we can understand why he is the way he is. He's truly broken. I don't know how to feel about this? I still want him to pay for everything he did, but maybe, if it were possible, I would like him to receive help and maybe even redeem himself in some way. If anyone can do that, it's definitely Colt. But for that, Colt would first need to forgive him, which is kind of complicated given how much Leviathan hurt him. But, well, looking at it from a totally erotic point of view, Colt has two super powerful heroes at his feet (Three if we count Braxton), ready to do everything they can to keep him safe. It would be interesting to see a super villain with manipulative powers added to the collection. But that's just my fetishes whispering in my ear. And damn Colt. Someone urgently needs to tell him to his face that he loves Rocky. How can he, after everything that went on between the two, still think they're just best friends? I can't wait to read the last chapter. I loved every moment of this series. I'm sure the ending will be something exciting. I'm anxious to see what awaits us.

2/6/25, 8:14 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Thanks! And I agree wouldnt it be nice to have two super heroes that will do anything for you. And. Colt is smart but totally dense to love. That’s why I like him. He’s been through a lot and really doesn’t _get_ that Rocky loves him. Even though he’s made it obvious.
2/6/25, 7:45 PM
AKA - The shit Supervillains will do to avoid going to therapy. So just one thing that kinda pulled me out of it: what happened to Coach Daniels and the teammates? One second, Colt and Eli are running over to the burning building, then the next Leviathan/Iron Claw is speaking to Colt directly about his parents without any other details about what Colt did to free the trapped folks. Just feels a bit abrupt. Like, did they save the people or did the trapped folks just burn to death?

2/6/25, 8:11 PM
@[RubberLeatherDrone](/user/show/129598) It actually wasn’t supposed to be abrupt. I’ll check and see if I accidentally left it out. In my draft he gets them out and rushes out of the battle area. They all are ok. They are needed later! Edit: yes there is a paragraph and some dialogue missing. I’ll fix that when I can! Good eye!
Anonymous
2/6/25, 1:53 PM
This was excellent, looking forward to more!
Feb 5, 2025
2/6/25, 12:12 PM
Hot, loved it.
2/6/25, 6:59 AM
Again and again chapters in this series have been among my favorites. This one is another favorite. The household Dom had a wonderful reign while it lasted. His downfall was falling in love with Sammy, and then teaching Sammy everything he knew about his process for taking down and conditioning another obedient sub. Sammy was the youngest Parker, got everything he wanted, and in the end that included the man who taught him how to be a dominant and how to build a harem. The next question is what happens next. Does Sammy take over the entire harem, or does he share in the power? I still don't know what will happen next, but i was right about this chapter: Jack Parker is the man to tell us all where this goes from here.
Anonymous
2/6/25, 5:24 AM
It won't be, kinda sucks tbh.
2/6/25, 5:07 AM
Too bad this never continued. Oh well …
2/6/25, 4:20 AM
Wow...wasn't expecting the lore. I love it.