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3/14/21, 7:56 AM
Left us with a cliffhanger. Another Schrodinger's cat. Either way I have a feeling Marc will come back for Teddy's ass. The ring won't let him stop. Dale is sitting on one hand while holding his chin with another. Can he scratch that itch for an hour?
SouthernFratStar
3/14/21, 7:11 AM
A great preview i think the best is yet to come!
3/14/21, 7:09 AM
This story is so hot. It's one of my favorite stories on this site (and you're one of my favorite authors!) It's funny, I've actually had several times in the last few months where I've been having sex with a guy and I've imagined the ending to this story in order to help me cum. It's literally that hot lol
3/14/21, 6:42 AM
Please keep going. There must be so much more that can be told. The Father and his friends, The Father and The Brothers and there has to be an obscure cousin somewhere, LOL!
3/14/21, 6:03 AM
[@Grant Spiral](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/57142) - Thank you! You're lovely :) @anon - Thank you sir! I always love seeing your comments, they really light up my day. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - No worries bro, I think it made the story hotter. I love when I can steal ideas from the comments and make a better story. I'm going to admit - I wasn't sure what was going to happen if Marc fucked the same guy twice, and the physical transformations just sort of happened. I'm hoping I'll be able to make it all come together! My whole concept for this chapter was 'Riley sells out his friend for another ride', glad it was hot! And yup, we're ready for Dale - I've just posted the next chapter, hopefully we'll see it approved soon. [@absman420](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/162063) - Thanks! You know how much I love your work, so it's always a thrill to see you enjoy mine. I didn't really expect this to turn into the roller coaster we're on, but here we are. Let's hold on and see where it goes!
3/14/21, 5:31 AM
Much hotter than who I was thinking of! Find me on the Gay Spiral Stories Discord and we can talk more!
Anonymous
3/14/21, 4:12 AM
I can get behind forced twinkification as much as any other faggot on this site, but the kind of "any non-stereotypical gay must just be faking it" value judgement made here just seems odd. Amir seems like a real solid daddy though.
3/14/21, 3:57 AM
Glad to see you back at work on the story and you've delivered a great continuation of the story. I understand being pulled away from your writing; I'm in the same boat. I look forward to seeing the rest of the story whenever you're able to get around to posting it.
3/14/21, 3:16 AM
I'm not even into feet but I love the control Dave has his marines and how he uses those bodies. can't wait for preppy
3/13/21, 11:22 PM
good to know, glad I helped, good luck on the next story