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3/14/21, 9:58 AM
oh my god this is so exciting the set up is great, the stakes are high and im already conflicted on best outcomes!!! this is gonna be great!
3/14/21, 9:28 AM
@BearBoi, Thank you for your compliment of my character Amir. I appreciate it. As for my supposed "value judgement" you are reading way too much into it. My last story was about bears being turned into the bear version of Himbos, mainly because people who use the term "himbo" like to exclude bears from their definition and being a bear myself I would love to be turned into one without being given body dysmorphia issues. The thing that turns me on the most about hypnosis is personality transformation, especially when it involves a person being turned into something very different from what they were before, so I love the idea of a guy using extreme hypnosis to transforms masculine guys into fem submissive boy toys. He only transformed the barber so he'd have someone to control who could do the physical transformations on his boys and given that he likes femboys he was going to make Carlos into one too. I'm in no way saying that all gay men are fem at the core nor do I think they should all be transformed into them, there are lots of wonderfully twisted things guys can be transformed into.
Anonymous
3/14/21, 8:50 AM
spectacular!!!
Mar 13, 2021
Chastor
3/14/21, 8:18 AM
This is one of the best series I've read on here, hope you keep it up!
nyan
3/14/21, 7:57 AM
when will you start writing again
3/14/21, 7:56 AM
Left us with a cliffhanger. Another Schrodinger's cat. Either way I have a feeling Marc will come back for Teddy's ass. The ring won't let him stop. Dale is sitting on one hand while holding his chin with another. Can he scratch that itch for an hour?
SouthernFratStar
3/14/21, 7:11 AM
A great preview i think the best is yet to come!
3/14/21, 7:09 AM
This story is so hot. It's one of my favorite stories on this site (and you're one of my favorite authors!) It's funny, I've actually had several times in the last few months where I've been having sex with a guy and I've imagined the ending to this story in order to help me cum. It's literally that hot lol
3/14/21, 6:42 AM
Please keep going. There must be so much more that can be told. The Father and his friends, The Father and The Brothers and there has to be an obscure cousin somewhere, LOL!
3/14/21, 6:03 AM
[@Grant Spiral](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/57142) - Thank you! You're lovely :) @anon - Thank you sir! I always love seeing your comments, they really light up my day. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - No worries bro, I think it made the story hotter. I love when I can steal ideas from the comments and make a better story. I'm going to admit - I wasn't sure what was going to happen if Marc fucked the same guy twice, and the physical transformations just sort of happened. I'm hoping I'll be able to make it all come together! My whole concept for this chapter was 'Riley sells out his friend for another ride', glad it was hot! And yup, we're ready for Dale - I've just posted the next chapter, hopefully we'll see it approved soon. [@absman420](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/162063) - Thanks! You know how much I love your work, so it's always a thrill to see you enjoy mine. I didn't really expect this to turn into the roller coaster we're on, but here we are. Let's hold on and see where it goes!